little inu gets caught!!!!!!!

in this story inuyasha (inu)is still a little kid1

"mama," little inu said.2

"what is it my sweety?" replied his mom3

"can i go out side and play with my round bouncy toy?"4

"sure honey."5

so little inu went out side with his ball and began to bounce it. suddenly little inu's ball bounced really high and over his neighbors fence. first little inu cried then he jumped over the really high fence.6

on the other side was millions and millions of toys! little inu being just a little kid wanted them all for himself. he gathered them all up and was on top of the fence when......7

little inu's dad came home and saw him.8

little inu had to give the toys back and apologize. he got a rather hard spanking from his dad.9

the end10

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  • April 25, 2005
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    very short not good for a first time though

  • a dieing soul
    April 25, 2005
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    o...k... crazy ness to short