it was a beautiful night, hidan and i were walking into the forest, we ran into a girl. she said her name was Kaori.1
"as i said Kaori is my name!" she yelled at hidan2
"yeah i know!" he yelled back i sighed3
"no fighting hidan!" i said and yanked his cloak collar4
"dei-san, do not get mixed up in this" he said as he looked at me. kaori sighed "ya know what hidan she's right." she said as she jumped up with the ellegance of a butterfly. i smiled and took hidans hand "lets go hidan" i said as light as a butterfly flies peacfully through the air. that sent a gentle feeling down hidan's spine "girl i love it when you say things like that" he saighed, carefully gripping my hand.5
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~6
pein called us all to a meeting.7
"i called this meeting to asure that Sannin, Jiriaya, has a Daughter..." pein said behing the akatsuki counsle table. i looked at him as konan said "ok, since that has been said, is there any motions to be said?" i stood "i, dei-san of akatsuki, anti-hotspring, move that akatsuki ordanince 445, the rule agenst not being able to nagotiate with village protectors, to be abolished!" hidan cheered as so did itachi kisame and sasori. pein rapped the gabble in his hand "and do let me remind out fellow akatsuki, that this meeting ins serious!" hidan sttod "and i, hidan of anti-hotspring would like to second that motion!" he sat down. "i believe that a vote is in order" konan said simply "how does the counsel vote?" pein asked. "no!" tobi said, "yeah" itachi said. "yes!" said konan, pein stared at her. "no!" pein said then sighed "we have a tie....." then one last "yes" cane in late from sasori. "the motion has passed....the rule agebnts nagotiation is now broken and no longer in effect" pein said, the rest of us akatsuki cheering.8
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~two hours later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~9
[knock...knock...knock]10
"yeah who is it?" hidan asked from his living room as the front door was being knocked on rapidly. i got off his lap and walked to the door, konan was standing there "hello..Kaori came by shortly after the meeting and told me to give you and hidan this" she said holding out a small wrapped box "a gft?" i said taking it "yeah,...she hope that you two like it" konan said, walking back to pein's house. i walked over to hidan.11
"hidan Kaori gave us a gift, want to open it with me?" i asked12
"yeah" he said walking in the room, we sat back down on the couch and opend it. there was four paper butterflies and nine stuffed dogs and a note saying 'hope you like these gifts and congrats on winning the vote during counsel...hope to see you again, Kaori'13
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~14
jiriaya ran threw the forest looking for Kaori "dammit girl where are you?" he asked himself looking. he saw her, with me. "what's dei-san doing here?" he said as he aproched us.15
"hidan and i loved the gifts, thank you" i said smiling at her16
"ah your welcome...dad helped me with them" she said, happy.17
"kaori!" jiraiya said looking at her18
"yes dad?" she asked19
"can i talk with you for a moment?" he asked simply20
"um sure dad...dei-san il be back" she said getting up21
"girl, why are you with an akatsuki?" he asked worried22
"dad, she abolished a rule agenst us and now we are alowed to be friends... its like this..." (she sat there and explained the entire akatsuki meeting to him in under an hour)23
"and thats what happend" she said stepping back.24
"so they can realy be our friends?" he asked looking at me. this time he noticed that i did not have my cloak on.25
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~an hour later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~26
i yawned "it was great talking with you again, KAori, hope to do it again soon" i said tired but happy. hidan came27
"hey you ready to go back home?" hdian asked, smiling sleepishly at me.28
"yeah....see you tomarow kaori!" i said as hidan adn i lept away. kaori walked home to se her father at the dinning table, asleep. "he must have been working on that book of his...." she said as she walked to her room adn listened to some music.29
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~two weeks later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~30
kaori and i ahd a sleep over.31
"and i said 'yes i am your butterfly!' it was like, so fun!" i said, being a typical girl.32
"yeah!! last week when i got home, dad was asleep at the table, he had his half-donr book under his head!" kaori said, as i got up and sang. hidan and jiraiya were outside, camping out.33
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with the guys~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~34
"i womder what they are doing" hidan sighed.35
"oh trust me, when two girls are together the talk about girl-things...you realy do not need to get into one of those conversations" jiraiay said with a laugh.36
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with the girls~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~37
"ah! i love this song!" i said as i turned up DDR's song "butterfly". kaori and i sang to it while dancing. we acted like we were flying through the air, using bedsheets as wings. "we are butterflys!" i said having fun.38
"yes we are!" she agreeed as we hoped from one bed to the other. back adn forth, i did a backflip in the air and landed cutely on my feet. "whoooo!" i screamed as i landed.39
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~40
kaori and i step out of the room, happy "oh my god! that was so fun!" i said giving my friend a high-five "yeah it was!" she said, remembering the slumber party. i still had the sheets teid to my arms, hidan came in and looked at me weirdly. "um what did you do?" he asked slowly. "um wild slumber party! we pretended we were butterflies.." i said sheepishly. kaori looked at her dad "um dad, is there a chance i could come back" she asked looking up at him. "maybe later" he said smiling.41
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~later that day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~42
kaori and i were in the kitchen, baking peis for some reason. she pulled out one, an apple pie, she smiled at her work. i pulled out a pumpkin pie. "the guys are going to love this!" i said seting the pie on teh counter, opening the fridge and pullung cout the cool whip. "oooh! cool whip!" kaori said smiling. i put it on the counter and called "guys! come and get it!" jiraiya poked his head through the door, hidan pushed him through. "pie!" they both yelled lning up, droling like puppies. "ok guys stop drooling and tell me what kind you'd like" jiraiya pointed at the apple pie. hidan pointed at the pumpkin pie. i gave them both two peices each whith a fork and cool whip on it "no go to the living room, kaori and i want to wach a movie with you two" i said smiling. "she is as gracful as a butterfly" hidan sighed, winking at me. 43
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~later that day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~44
jiraiay smiled "that was great girls! kaori, we'd best get home..." kaori smiled "see you around" she said waving as she and her dad walked out of the door, closing it carefuly behind them.45
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~with kaori and her dad~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~46
"kaori, what do you want to do for bonding?" her dad asked47
"um...bake and wach movies" she answered happily48
her and jiraiya strt baking cookies, pie and cake. after the baking spree they walk in the living room with thier share of their baking, and pop a dvd in the dvd player. "dad, i dont remember speding this much time baking with you" kaori said, giggling. "i know...we havent baked like that in a long time" he said waching the screen. she looks at her dad "dad, how was bonding with the two friends i have?" he smiled "i never knew hidan to be that funny" kaori smiled "and i never knew his girlfriend to be as exiting!"49
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~**the end for now**~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Author notes
well, i wanted to help out Kaori-Dhan, and i based this off of DDR's Butterfly....or tried to...hehe *smiles sheepishly* my immagination had a spazz so i had to think hard on this....anyways i hope ya like it...^.^ *.*
A contest entry
- Pretty Much Anything!! For Everyone to join!! by Sha Wujing.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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It was a pretty good story but you need to capitilize the begining of your sentences!
~M~
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I liked it....it was........different. XD
Good luck in the contest!!
~Kaori


