The Baron came home in the early morn, only to find a strange man infront of his bridge, bent over a corpse and engorging himself on it's flesh. Freezing, the Baron had tensed at the sight, staring at the madman in alarm. The man turned around and looked up at him with a bloody face and chunks of human meat caught in between his teeth. He gasped in horror as he saw the chewn corpse was none other than his wife. Drawing his knife a second too late, it took a short while for the Baron to realize the madman had driven his own blade into the Baron's neck.
Author notes
A short story I wrote for a class.
Comments
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Oh my God! That was good! I enjoyed the horror and surprise and it leaves me hanging wondering what happened and why.
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"Drawing his nice a second too late...."
it should be...
Drawing his kinfe a second too late
or atleast it would make more sence -
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Oh, thank you so much! I wasn't looking at the screen or keyboard when I was typing, so I didn't catch that error. Thankies again! :3
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