Paradox

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Nothing in the world2

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all thing are in4

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no place to go6

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all things are going8

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time is static 10

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time flies by 12

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a butterfly so helpless14

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hurricanes on the nigh16

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You might have a different idea about its meaning, but i would like to know.

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  • InksterMoxy
    January 17

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    it was cool. Definitely a paradox. Good job. *still confused* i'm kind of wary on your meaning though

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


  • Dawn Bon
    November 25, 2008
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    haha woah random