A Love for Me

I’ve always wondered1

How it would be2

To find a love3

Meant specially for me.4

The years have passed5

And love has hid6

Growing cold and lonely7

Is what I did.8

I met one man9

Who I thought could be10

The right man to love,11

And the man loved me.12

We had a great friend13

My heart leaned his way14

And so my heart split15

Two pieces each frayed.16

I knew it was time17

To tell my first love,18

My Peter Pan in life,19

That I knew a new love.20

Not to replace him21

For He still has my love22

But to be honest23

There is another above.24

This man that started25

As merely a friend26

Has opened my eyes27

Through all he has penned.28

About the world29

He has shown me much30

Through all his words31

And tender rough touch.32

I had always thought33

Gentle described such loves34

But I’ve learned through talks35

There can be love without kid gloves.36

Now there is a distance37

Between our shared heart38

Insecurities abound,39

Fearing the other will part.40

All I know is this41

I have given my heart away,42

To the one and only43

And his I will stay.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    This is a wonderful take on devotion to another.
    I like it very much. Best wishes in my contest.

    Riftkin

  • nobumagawaX
    November 25, 2008
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    nice and pretty! ^_^


  • TNTrouble
    November 23, 2008

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    Aye...tis beautiful My love. I am always touched by your writings especially when about us. *smiles and hugs you*

    • MsAlee
      November 23, 2008
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      *snuggles in your arms so tight and returns the hug adding a quick kiss*