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Another day has come and gone much too quickly and now is the time of day I dread most, the time when we must part as you leave for work, but lately you have been surprising me with little ways to ease the separation of your going. I just never know what to expect. As the sun sets, I clear the supper dishes, and you emerge from your shower, smelling oh so sexy. It’s all I can do to keep from trembling with excitement while I make a fresh pot of coffee so I can fill the thermos for you later just before you head out the door. 2
Tonight, you enter the kitchen in my favorite button down shirt and jeans. Damn, you look so good, and my body reacts instantly at the sight of you, but I know there is no time so I hand you a cup of fresh brew and as you take it from me, you draw me into your warm, strong embrace and kiss me lightly on the forehead, telling me to forget the dishes for now. You want me to come sit with you for a while before you have to go. I hate to see you work so hard, but I know you have only our best interest in mind so the dishes can wait until you are gone as I keep your best interest in my heart. 3
As you head off toward the porch, I call after you to give me a second; I need to grab a blanket. A little bit too chilly for me tonight as the snow as just begun to fall, but I love to watch the new, fresh powder as it falls silently on the trees. I join you on the porch and cover us both with my favorite multicolored blanket and as you take my hand in yours you are shocked at just how cold it truly is. Placing it gently between your thighs to warm it, while I warm my free hand with my mug of coffee, we sit cuddled together enjoying the evening. 4
As I lean my head on your shoulder I can smell the lingering aroma of your cologne which has always aroused me, and I sigh lightly, trying to keep you from hearing. A small shudder escapes me but I am able to pass it off as being chilly. You pull me closer and comment on the fragrance of my perfume, and now it’s your turn to sigh. I just smile and stare at the stars when suddenly a shooting star darts across the night sky and you ask if I saw it. I reply that I did, and you turn slightly to face me and tell me that you want for us to make a wish.5
I look deeply into your wonderful eyes and smile, my only response, besides deep quiet thought that passes through my heart of the wish that I have carried since I was a little girl in Illinois, hoping that one day, it would somehow come true. And as you squeeze my hand just a little, I know that you have made your wish, and we both sit in silence, wondering what the other wished for. 6
Once the wishes are made, you gently lower my head into your lap and tenderly caress my hair, paying special attention to each strand as if they were gold. I’ve always loved the feel of your fingers in my hair. And now, as we cherish the few precious moments that we have remaining, I enjoy your touch all the more. Tonight, there is a stillness, a gentleness about you that makes me just want to enjoy you for hours, and I realize that this is what life is supposed to be like. Peaceful and serene without all the deadlines and stress that we sometimes create for ourselves. And as you lovingly stroke my hair, I set my coffee cup down then raise my hand to your chest to stroke it. I need to feel your heart beating. 7
As I caress your wonderful chest, you slowly unbutton my blouse to expose my red lace bra. A deep sigh escapes your lips as your fingers dance lightly to their own tune upon my tender flesh and now, my own heart is beating wildly within my chest as your flesh meets with mine. Loving the way you touch me brings out the best and the bravest of me as I undo a few more of your buttons to let my fingers play in the glory of your wonderful chest, I can feel the warmth of your heat and the beating of your heart against my delicate finger tips. With each touch and caress I give you, your heart beats a little faster which increases my pleasure.8
As we enjoy the tender touches and caresses we are giving each other to create a memorable moment, you look deeply into my eyes and tell me that I am unforgettable, a term that has special meaning to us, and that you wish this night did not have to end. So as we burn each caress, each loving comment each tender moment into our hearts, you lean down and kiss me on the forehead, then tell me it is time for you to go. 9
As we walk back into the house, I put the coffee cups into the sink and fix your thermos and dinner for you to take, I can feel your eyes on my every move and I feel so blessed to be so cared for. I turn to hand you your things and you kiss me lightly on the lips with the promise that you will wake me when you get back. But as you walk out the door, it is my turn to watch your every move in your wonderful blue jeans, and you hesitate, turn and blow me a kiss. I just smile and tell you to consider it caught and put in a very special place until you can kiss me there yourself. 10
After you close the door and I hear you turn your key to lock me in, I finish up the last of the dishes, turn out the lights and go to the bedroom. I grab my journal and my pen and place them on the bed then change into my pajamas. I step into the bathroom, and admire the slight glow on my cheeks before brushing my hair and teeth. I move silently back to my room, reflecting on the night with you and I slip between the warm covers and let my mind and my pen wander to see what secrets my heart may still be holding. And once my mind is empty of all its cares, I set my journal to the side, and turn off the light, knowing that soon, you will be turning something else on for me. I can hardly wait. Good night my Handsome Prince. 11
Author notes
Although this is not the usual erotica I pen, it has just enough sensuality to it that I did not want to label it with just a love or romance heading thereby making it available to younger readers. Hope you enjoy just the same... Lily ~*
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Comments
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Wow! This is so sweet. I felt beautiful reading this. Very romantic and passionate. Beautiful imagery and a very nice story till the end. Well organised and structured. The snow and tea were beautifully tempting!
Best Wishes,
Charishma -
The imagery was breathtaking in this story. Quite enchantingly told. Illinois, huh? Originally from Chicago myself, though now transplanted to Colorado Springs...
. The story held me till the end when I was sad to see you close the journal and only a hope of reading further adventures. I read your notes. I applaud you for taking a romantic love type and putting it into the erotica category as there are a couple of parts in it that younger readers should not know about, but probably do already. Thanks for a delightful story. 
rose If you get a chance, could you let me know how I truly did with my only 'erotic' piece to date? allpoetry.com/Story/375955 I would appreciate a critical view on this as I would like to work on it more.
Edited on Aug 08, 11:08 because 'to add what i forgot'. -
It's so beautiful darling... to read it is so tender and touching and it makes me all warm and gooey inside lol
Shari
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Beautiful
Oh to be love and be love like that...most can only dream of it. This was so wonderful and full of love. You write beautifully. Keep up the great work.
~Babygirl~
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Mmmm, Bella, I see you are still telling of your wonderful lacey things. Red. oh how that makes my blood boil! This was a sweet and hot piece all rolled into one. Which makes me think, what else could we roll into one? Hmm?
Juan
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ayten,
Thank you for your generous words and for taking the time to read and comment on this piece.
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this was so senusal, it's like a dream. you are arelly talented writer. it's like a little bit of fairy dust, making it bloom with love.
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Glad I could stir some things for you with my writing Lady.
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Very lovely! It is just as intense as the others. It's even sweeter when it stirs so much deeper than hormones!
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I have a very vivid imagination... lol Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this. Glad you liked.
Lily ~* -
Tudor,
Thanks for the comment, I am glad you enjoyed.
Lily ~* -
Im happy that your happy, this was a very well written story and your very lucky to have someone
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Ah Zorro,
So nice to know I can count on you to stroke me...er I mean my ego. Thanks Bud and I am glad you liked this one.
Lily ~* -
Laura darkspot,
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this very personal piece. I truly appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed!
Lily ~* -
well this was nice, it gives me the warm fuzzies all over. Keep up the good writing so I have something to read when I'm stuck and unable to write something myself. >;o)
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ohh, really nice read, very sweet. liked it a lot.
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Ronnie,
Thank you for such a tender comment on this special piece. I always adore your replies to my work.
Lily ~* -
True romance, and a loving warm relationship. This is so beautifully written That i could see the couple sitting there and his fingers through my hair all at the same time, amazing.
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Ken,
I am so glad that you enjoyed this special write that was prompted by a short conversation I had. I just had to put it to paper...it was perfect writing material. Thanks for the amazing comment.
Lily ~* -
Hmmm where to start. Great images and very romantic. Plus you made it readable to younger people. Its just perfect. Just like you.
Great JoB Lily
Ken -
This was very romantic and sensual, and the imagery is startling. I like the way you left a lot to the imagination with this one, it is gentler, and still causes that ache, but does not make me feel frustrated! lol I could imagine sitting gazing at those stars, cathcing the flakes of snow on my tongue while being gently loved. Gold star! xx
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