Jenny's hands opened up and her fans dropped to the ground. Jenny straightened up as anger burned inside of her.1
"Jenny?!" Blaze took a step back, "Your my master's enemy!"2
Master!? Jenny's mind screamed.3
"Your a-a"4
"Sister-"5
"...To these freaks!"6
He paused.7
"And your a ninja!!"8
Jenny had enough. She bent down and picked up her fans.9
"Isn't it obvious! I can run faster then you, I have quicker reflexes then you, and I always appear out of the shadows."10
Blaze was stunned. Then his face straightened as he said,11
"Jenny...I'm sorry, but i've got to do this for my master."12
Blaze pulled out his swords and ran towards Jenny. Jenny ran towards him, fans open. And to make matters worse, it started to rain.13
Blaze's swords locked with Jenny's fans as soon as she closed them, preparing for the interlock. Jenny managed to push him away, picked up her foot, and swinging it around. Blaze jumped out of the way and behind her. He taped on her shoulder. Jenny turned and Blaze punched her in the shoulder. she stumbled backwards and stood up.14
Jenny launched her closed fans and Blaze. He batted away one, but the other one hit him in the head. Jenny flipped and grabbed her fans. Blaze quickly recovered and jumped up, swords raised. His swords locked with Jenny's fans, again.15
Jenny felt herself being pushed back. She took one step forward, and kicked Blaze in the head with her right foot, but before Blaze hit the ground, Jenny hit him with her left foot. Blaze hit the ground, Jenny dropped down, and kicked him away.16
Blaze tried to get back up, but Jenny slammed him down with her foot.17
"And stay down!" she cried.18
Jenny looked around. The foot ninjas were still fighting, but shredder was gone. Suddenly Blaze kicked her in the back. Jenny stumbled forward, and Blaze hooked his foot around her ribs and brought his leg back, launching Jenny, who slammed against the wall.19
Blaze ran over to her with his swords drawn. Again they locked weapons. Jenny forced his arms to the side, and unleashed a spin kick into Blazes chest. Blaze skidded back. 20
Jenny stood up and realized she was very wet and tiring. In the distance she heard the clock tower chime 12 times; Midnight. 21
I've got to end this, she thought.22
Jenny grabbed her fans, and ran. Then she jumped and pulled her right arm over the left. Just before she landed, she jerked her right arm right, and slammed Blaze with her fans. Blaze landed on his back and slid over to the edge of the roof.23
Jenny walked over to him. Blaze opened his eyes to see her. Lightning struck in the background. Blaze raised his hand.24
"Jenny! Wait!"25
Jenny paused.26
"Don't."27
Jenny drew back. Blaze thursted out his right fist. Jenny caught it, then caught his left on as he thrusted it out.28
"I may be a servant to your enemy-"29
Blaze kicked Jenny and flipped himself onto his feet.30
"......But we can still be boyfriend/ girlfriend can't we?"31
Jenny paused, and thought about all of the good times she had with Blaze. But before she could say anything, the bad times she had with shredder.32
Jenny felt anger burn with in her. Jenny's hands started to shake, and her breathing got faster.33
"NO, NO ,NO!!!!!!!!"34
Jenny jumped up and kicked Blaze in the chest, knocking him down. Jenny remembered the necklace Blaze gave her. Jenny took a hold of it, and pulled it off of her neck. She threw it at Blaze.35
"A boyfriend who works for an enemy, is no boyfriend of mine."36
Just then sirens appeared out of the distance.37
"Come on, sis!"38
Jenny looked at Blaze one more time, before she turned and walked away. 39
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It was about 1:30 a.m, when Master Splinter noticed Jenny's bedroom light was on. He had worked out a system out with his kids, if you needed to talk with him, leave your light on. Barely an of his kids did it anymore.41
Splinter creeped up to her to her door and peered into her room. Jenny was laying in her bed with her back to him. Splinter took a couple steps into her room before saying,42
"Something wrong?"43
Jenny sat up and said,44
"Nothing out of the ordinary."45
Jenny's bed was a bunk bed, and Jenny always sleeped in the top bunk. It only took him one jump to get to the top, and Master Splinter sat beside her. It took her a while to find the right way to start, but she finally did.46
"I should of known....."47
She paused.48
"....I've should of known that Blaze wasn't like the other boys. I feel like a total idiot."49
"Even if you knew, you still could of not stopped it, for he would of blinded you from the truth no matter what."50
Jenny thought over his words.51
"Your right. But still......."52
Jenny fell back into her pillow, afraid to say what she was going to say.53
"I swear....."54
Jenny looked into Master Splinters eyes.55
".......To never love again, unless I'm ready to."56
Master Splinter didn't argue with her, but nodded his head and hugged her.57
Blaze gulped as Hun escorted him to shredder's room. He knelt down again and said,58
"You summoned me mas-"59
"WHY YOU IGNORANT FOOL!"60
Blaze gulped again.61
"You made a friend with my enemy!"62
"I-I-I'm sorry my-"63
"SORRY DOESN'T CUT IT!" Shredder yelled, "You failed me, and now must pay the price for fauiler!"64
Shredder raised his pointy things and brought them down in a slashing motion. Blaze screamed, then fell silent.65
"Let this be a symbol of my HATRED TOWARDS MY ENEMYS!!!"
Author notes
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
i used to have a crush on a boy named blaze back in 4th grade, and he broke my heart when he moved away. So i decided to make him a character, and break Jenny's heart.......to bad he had to pay for it in the end....
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Comments
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Good job.
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Thank you for wishing me a happy birthday =]
I don't really know what to think of this story, and boy that title is quite a mouthful ^.^
I think you did a good job writing it though, but a little more detail would have been better
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An interesting concept. Could use a little editing but it wasn't hard to follow. I like the charecters. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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O.O poor Balze
But gosh this makes it more exciting! Nicely done!
♥ Blackwings

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Yeah is Blaze dead? I love it! Great job Jennifer!
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That's 'enemies'. Does that mean Blaze is dead? Hurray!


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