Two paths

Cindy whimpered as she stared deep out the window, watching the rain pat against the glass. She was in mid thought when a chalk cracked against her skull, "Ow! She snarled, "Who did that?!" She gasped, and quickly covered her mouth.1

The math teacher humphed, "I did it. What are you going to do about it?" Cindy blushed as snickers filled the room. Jack ruffled his black hair, and rolled his eyes. So bored. Cindy always gets in trouble. He chuckled, pathetic. The teacher snapped, "You see something amusing, Jack?" Jack trailed his eyes down. The teacher stuck his nose in the air, "That's what I thought." Cindy let out a giggle, but immediately stopped once Jack glared at her.2

"That's what I thought," he giggled as if he was her.3

Cindy rolled her eyes to him and turned to the fount on the classroom she though Jack was an dumbass but he was cute, she slap her face trying to forgot about Jack.4

Jack looked to her and laughed a bit and looked at the teacher "Jack, I see you after in lunch in not an dating game".5

"But, but, but Sir!"6

"No buts, or you get a phone call to your mother!" The teacher yelled at him.7

"Yes sir," he mumbled under his voice. The teacher let out a sly grin. Once the teacher turned his back, Jack whispered, "*bunny*." Jack turned back to Cindy and noticed her tongue sticking out. Before Jack said anything, the passing bell rang.8

They gathered their stuff and shuffled out of there. The teacher reminded Jack, "Remember, at lunch." Jack rolled his eyes. He bolted down the hallway, trying to get as far away from that classroom as he can.9

He was running so fast, he didn't notice the new kid walk out of that turn. Jack smashed hard against the kid. The impact sent them both falling, hard on the ground. Jack stood back on his feet and spat, "Watch where you're going, noob!" His brown eyes locked with baby blue eyes.10

The boy cowered, "Sorry."11

Jack rolled his eyes. He walked away, but stopped. Keeping his back away, he asked, "You're Edward, arn't you?"12

Edward bit his lips, "Yes." He stood up, dusted himself off, fixed his blond curls, and stood by Jack's side, "What's your name?" He stretched his hand out.13

Jack looked down to his hand and smiled a bit a toke it "Jack" he said to the new boy.14

Edward smiled a little at Jack.15

"So what are you doing ..."16

"Mr. Lab rat, are you coming to see me or not?" The teacher stood behind him.17

Jack rolled his eyes and turned around and jump a bit .18

"Yes Sir...." He walked and drag his feet on the ground hoping this will end soon , he look around to see Edward was going in a flash.19

"What a noob" he smiled a bit before entering the classroom and saw the one and only Cindy sitting in the fount round with her arms folder. Jack smiled at her.20

Cindy's cheeks brightened as she noticed Jack staring at her. She turned her attention away from him. He laughed in amusement. The teacher whacked him with his book, "This isn't a dating game. Now sit." He pointed to the seat in the front of the room. Jack dragged his feet, pretending that weights was locked onto his feet.21

The teacher rubbed his chin, "Now both of you will write one hundred times, I am not here to flirt, I am here to learn." Jack rolled his eyes, than pulled out a rumpled piece of paper.22

Cindy placed her head on her hands, why don't I have the guts to tell him how I feel? She blushed heavily at Jack. He turned and noticed her looking at him. He peaked at the teacher, saw that the teacher isn't looking. He gave her a wink, then pulled his eyes back on the paper.23

Jack sigh as he started to write the lines over and over again "I am not here to flirt, I am here to learn" 24

"Stuff this" he said under his breath. And he threw his pen out of the window.25

"Oww" he hear an voice outside, Jack went to the window to see Edward!.26

"*bunny* Edward I am sorry!" he yelled to him. 27

"OI get back here Jack and do your lines" Cindy said to him Jack smiled and jump out f the window the teacher still didn't notice maybe cause of the headphones in his ears. Cindy roll her eyes but smiled at the same time. 28

Edward was amazed  that Jack land perfectly on his feet. Jack spread his arms out, "Ta-da." Edward was motionless. Jack laughed at the expression on his face. Jack waved his hand in front of Edward's face, "Any one home?"29

Edward knocked out of it, and said, "That was amazing!" Jack rubbed his head bashfully. That look on Jack made Edward blush. He turned away from Jack, I'm a starting to like him?30

Jack knew what this pose was, and smiled slyly. Let's play with Edward. He looked up at the window, and called out, "Hey, Cindy! Stick your head out." Cindy rolled her eyes, then stuck her head out.31

At that moment, Jack took Edward by the arm and pressed his lips hard against his. Cindy's eyes grew wide.32

Jack let go of Edward and was shocked and covered his mouth.33

"I am very sorry, Edward" He run off in the school .34

Edward tried to stop him but to late he blush and touched his lips and smiled.Then he saw Cindy head in the window his eyes grew wide as well and then he ran off as well.35

"Jack is....gay?" Cindy said to her self over and over again tears came to her eyes and fell to the ground.36

Jack leaned against the school door. He tried to to calm down his breathing, "Why'ld I break down? It was supposed to be a game." He felt his face grew red. No. No, not this.37

Cindy huddled together, as tears streamed down her face. How could this be? Why, Edward? I know Jack for all my life, and that...That *bunny* took it away from me!? The teacher yanked the headphones off and hollered, "What are you doing!? Get back in your seat!"38

She moaned as she sat back into her seat. She hugged herself. The hot tears didn't stop. They just piled on her desk. She cried out, "Why?!" Her cries got louder as the pain in her chest increased. She was heart broken.39

Jack came back in the classroom he saw Cindy crying and saw the teacher was not there in the room.40

"Ummmm...Cindy?" he asked her 41

She looked up a bit and went back in her arms again42

"Go Away, Fag!" She yelled to him.43

Jack's heart ripped in two, she saw!!!! She hates me, she hates me , his eyes went red.44

"I can explain" He tried to calm her down.45

"I hate you, Jack! Go away!" She yelled at him .46

Jack snapped.47

"Why are you like this!? , So what if I kiss a boy, why do you care!? " He yelled back to her.48

Cindy began to tear up, "You never notice?" Her voice was soft and frail. Jack scratched his eyebrow. Her lips began to quiver, "You never noticed?" Jack's eyes widened as he stared at the pitiful girl that was in front of him. She spat, with hot tears dripping down her face, "You never noticed for years, but you would kiss a boy you never met before?!"49

Jack rolled his eyes, "Cindy, knock it off! You are being stupid right now!"50

Cindy got up, pulled her hand back, then thrust it it back down with great force, meeting with Jack's cheek.51

Jack coated his red cheek with his hand, "What the *bunny* is wrong with you?!"52

She cracked, "You are a *bunny*! You never noticed how I feel about you?!" Jack looked pitifully at the broken woman. She clenched her hands, and held her eyes tightly shut, "I loved you, damn it!!"53

Jack was dumbfound. She loved him all those years and he didn't know. he was an *bunny* ...54

"I don't know what to say... It's a shock to me, to hear that," he said to her.55

She didn't say anything but hot tears came to her face again just by looking at him make her cried.56

"What do you want me to say, god damn it?!" he yelled.57

She jump a bit "I...I don't know," she looked down to the ground.58

Jack felt bad about it. He walked up to her. He lifted her head up to see her pure green eyes that were looking up to his mud brown eyes.59

"I'm sorry," he said.60

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Her face loosened and her frustration turned inot hard tears. Jack took Cindy into his warm embrace. Rcking her back and forth, hushing her, telling her, "I'm sorry, don't cry." His tender voice engraved into her mind. 62

Her cries was hushed, but wasn't stopped. Closing her eyes, letting his body warm coat her.  She gently swade back and forth with Jack. Jack pulled her chin up and whispered one last time, "I truly am sorry." He pulled her into a warm kiss. Her eyes widened. As fast as it came, it stopped. Jack pulled back, gave her a bright grin, and walked off.63

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Cindy traced her finger up to her lips, "What's going on? Doesn't he like Edward?" She wiped away at her dry tears. Rage swarmed into her just by hearing the name, Edward. She pushed herself up. Images of Edward, came into mind. Edward and Jack's kiss stayed in the longest. Her fist formed into a fist. Her grip so tight, that her finger nails shredded her skin the lay on her palm. The blood turned her nails crimson red. She belowed, her teath bare, like a hungry animal wanting to eat something, "I will get rid of you, Edward!"65


Edward walked to his next class room with an huge smile on his face he was soo happy that he could kiss everyone!66

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Jack walked in and saw him with his smiled , "Hey! umm I need to talk to you" he asked him and drag him in the room next door. 68

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Edward nod "What's wrong?" he asked him . 70

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"It it I'm sorry for kissing you back here" Jack had he head down.72

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Edward smiled turn upside down, "I don't care Jack, I liked it."74

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"Really?"76

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"Yes, I really did," he moved closer to his face. 78

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"Here, I show you that I like it." He move his head up and locked lips with his.80

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Jack was caught off gaurd at first, but then pressed against Edwards passionet kiss. Jack's tongue pushed through Edwards lips, demanding entrance.Edward squeled a bit, as Jack's tongue tasted his. They played a little game of tongue hockey. Edward traced his hand down Jack's spine, sending a little tingle.82

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Cindy entered the class room, caught dead in her tracks. She couldn't handle the thought of Jack being in some one else's arms. Espacialy a man's arms! She growled, jropping her text books. Her rage took control over her. She pounced at Edward, leaing claw marks all over his face. 84

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Edward let out a loud cry from the pain of her nails digging into his skull. She wasn't satisfied till his blood trailed down his head. The red liqued stained his blond hair.86

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Jack cried out, "Cindy, stop!" She felt her blood rush to her ears, blocking Jack's demand. She sank her teath into Edwards neck, drawing blood. The warm fluid ran down her throut. Edward yelled, pulling at her hair. Cindy dug deeper, poking at a vain. Edward's eyes begand to water from the horrid pain that ingulfed his neck. Jack got up, grabbing his heavy book, and brought it upon Cindy's neck. She cried out, releasing Edward, and fell onto the tiled floor, that was now covered in blood.88

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Edward cowered behing Jack. Jack snarled, "What the *bunny* is wrong with you!?" Cindy stared deep at the blood that gathered under her fingernails.90

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"You kiss him right after me!" she looked up at him evily , she started to laught at the blood under her finger nails.92

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Edwards eyes went wide , he cried in pain he need to get out of here now! .94

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He hung to Jack , "I need help now" he cried to him , Jack noded and pick him up . He turn to her "I talk to you later".96

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He ran down the hallway and to the nurse bay , he placed him on the bed .98

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"I'm sorry you could of die" Jack started to cry to him.100

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Edward smiled "It ok I would of donde the same if you kiss her " he smiled and clean his blood off.102

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"But but she nearly killed you!" Jack looked at him . "Why are you smileing like that".104

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Then the nurse came "Sir you mum is coming to get you in 5mins take a rest then honey" 106

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Edward nodded and then looked up to him. 108

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"You should go " he told him.110

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Jack was unshure, but he gave him the nod. Edward smiled, and pressed his lips against his one last time. Edward kept that smile till Jack was out of sight. He fell on the bed, holding his last piece of sanity. Edward stared at the floor, "So, Jack kissed Cindy?"112

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Jack stomped back to class, hair russled, and eyes boiling. He slammed the door open, having eyes turn towards him, all he wanted was Cindy. He ignored the teacher's comment, and yanked Cindy by the shoulder.114

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He pulled her by the shirt and slammed her against the wall. "Why'ld you do that!? And it better be good, cause if it isn't," he let out a dark cackle, "I will break a bone every time a poor reason slips out of your lip." Cindy shivered. His brown eyes pierced hers. Eyes still locked.116

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The teacher blared, "We don't need any of that in this school!"118

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Jack growled, "Did I tell you to talk!?" He pulled his head to the teacher, hands tighted around Cindy's shirt, sealing her excape. "Unless your name is Cindy?" he finished with a calm, hushed voice that would bring shivers down any one's spine. Jack turned to Cindy with blood lust in his eyes, and a dark grin, "Now, where were we?"120

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Edward rested on the bed and whatched the clock. His eyes fallowed the minute hand as it twitched up. He sighed. The nurse entered the room with a bright smile, "Your mom is here."  122

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  • Sunless Spirit
    December 2, 2008

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    OMG!I found goofs!

    Goofs:

    1. When Edward asks Jack what his name is, Jack says 'Jake' and the story continues calling him Jake until the beggining of paragraph 21.
    2. "Pitaful" should be 'pitiful'.
    3. Go Away Fag! was capitalized. ...and mean
    3. What does coved mean? do you mean covered?
    4. You never notice? You never noticed?
    5. thats what I though?
    6. It is probably my computer, but from She saw! to I loved you, damnit (oo bad words ) is italic. It could be my computer.
    7. woman? Woman? what are they like in college or something? Srsly.


    I'm not going to rate this until it is finish



    Paws


  • Sunless Spirit
    November 28, 2008
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    i keep checking on it to see how much you guys finished so far. I like it. Good job, Courtneyz!


  • Omerta
    November 24, 2008

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    lol awesome. the word noob is funny


  • Sunless Spirit
    November 23, 2008
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    YES YES YES! I LIKE IT! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wait how in the world can he kiss a boy he barely knows lol


  • Wildpaw-Lily
    November 23, 2008

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    Ok...It needs a truckload of editing! buuuut....its interesting

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