Nina kept looking straight ahead, her eyes red from all the crying. Eva followed Nina's gaze and her eyes fell on it, their worse fear at the moment.2
"Shit!" Eva screamed.3
"What?!" Alex asked forcefully, unaware at what they were looking at. 4
Eva pointed out of the windshield, and Alex's eyes gazed at the smoke coming out from under the hood.5
"Damn it!" He screamed.6
"Stop the car damn it." Alex said, wanting to check it out.7
"But my.. my dad will die!" Nina screamed through tears. 8
She was crying and trembling because she was afraid the car would break down before they reach the hospital and get her father to safety.9
"Stop the damn car! This won't take too long." Alex said, afraid the damage would get worse if they continue to drive.10
Nina maneuvered the car to the shoulder of the road and hesitantly slowed down, finally pulling the car to a halt. Alex jumped out of the back seat and ran to the front of the car. Nina kept her hands on the wheel as Eva stared at Alex through the windshield. 11
Alex pulled the hood up and was overcome by a dark thick smoke. Eva heard Alex coughing, and she too got out of the car to try to help him. She went to the front and stood there, watching Alex examine the car. She walked around and then stopped dead in her track.12
"Uh oh.." She said, her voice carrying off to no where.13
Alex peered at Eva from around the hood. He had a confused look on his face, along with black smoke clogging his pores. 14
"What's wrong now?" Alex asked Eva, with a deep, frustrated sigh.15
"How about you come and look for yourself?" Eva said, frustrated at Alex's frustration. 16
She didn't understand why he was so angry, after all, they were all going through this at the same time. She felt that he had no reason to be complaining. The only person who had the right to scream and give frustrated sighs was Nina, who was still sitting still in the car.17
Alex slammed the front hood down and wiped his face. He walked to Eva and stood next to her.18
"What?" He said, not knowing what to look for.19
Eva kicked the back tire so she could get Alex's attention. He looked down at the tire and anger and frustration grew. The air in the tire was gone, they had a flat tire and a dying man in the back seat of a broken down car. 20
"Nina! Do you have any tools or jack in the back trunk?" Alex asked, looking down at Nina through the side window. 21
Nina turned her head to the side and looked at Alex.22
"Why? I don't know!" She said, getting worried as she looked back to check on her father. 23
Nina could hear her father's breathing slow down. His breaths were long and harsh. She jumped out of the car, wanting to help. 24
After wiping the tears off of her face, she took out a key so she could unlock the trunk. Her hand was shaking severely and she wasn't able to put the key in correctly. She looked at Alex and he understood. He grabbed the keys from her and quickly opened the trunk.25
"Holy shit!" He screamed, jumping back and stumbling down onto the rocky ground.26
Nina also jumped back, for she was overcome with a rotten smell. It was so hideous that it burned her nose. Eva ran to the back trunk and looked at Nina and Alex, who seemed stunned. She looked into the trunk and placed her hand onto her mouth, covering her nose at the same time. Eva's jaw dropped as she noticed what was in the trunk.27
"Oh God! What the hell?!" She screamed.28
Alex stood up quickly and wrapped his arms around Eva's waist. He pulled her back and she was screaming, tears spilling out from her eyes.29
"Oh my God!" Eva kept repeating, her eyes bulging out in horror.30
"Don't look at it!" Alex screamed to Eva, and to Nina at the same time. 31
He covered Eva's eyes with his hand and he began to stare into the trunk, not taking his own advice.32
His jaw dropped open, and his lower lip quivered quickly as his eyes stung with tears of horror. Eva got out of his grasp and continued to stare into the trunk, unable to take her eyes off of what she saw. Nina stood there, unable to speak or turn her head.33
"Who could do something like this?!" Nina finally asked, screaming into the air. 34
"Cage..." Alex said slowly as he continued to stare.35
Eva took in the sight of the decapitated bodies. Every body part was amputated from the rest of it's form, and they were swimming in blood which was slowly dripping onto the ground. 36
"One.. Two.. Three.. Four..." Eva counted slowly every hand she saw. 37
"Four hands... two bodies!" She said, realizing there were two dead bodies in the trunk of Nina's car.38
Alex slowly walked to the trunk and placed his hand on the forehead of a decapitated head. 39
"It's still warm." He paused, "And so is the blood." he said as his hand fell into some of the blood.40
"This just happened recently, not too long ago." He said, as he wiped his bloody hand on his shirt, leaving a bloody hand print in visible view.41
"Who are they?" Eva asked, her voice trailing off.42
Nina, Eva, and Alex stood there in shock as they stared at the bodies, and tried hard to think of a reasonable explanation. 43
"Who are they?" Alex repeated Eva's question. 44
Alex knew if they could answer that question, they could figure out what was going on. They could figure out why there were two bodies in the trunk, why the bodies were cut up. 45
Alex closed his eyes tightly and tried to think hard, but he couldn't think straight with the image of the bodies imprinted into his brain. 46
Author notes
Chapter 1: storywrite.com/Story/1081980
Chapter 2: storywrite.com/Story/1083786
Chapter 3: storywrite.com/Story/1085652
Chapter 4: storywrite.com/Story/1087150
Chapter 5: allpoetry.com/Story/1089052
Chapter 6: allpoetry.com/Story/1091483
Chapter 7: storywrite.com/Story/1093640
Chapter 8: allpoetry.com/Story/1097544
Chapter 9: allpoetry.com/Story/1099811
Chapter 10: allpoetry.com/Story/1103543
Chapter 11: storywrite.com/Story/1106082
Chapter 12: storywrite.com/Story/1108021
Chapter 13: allpoetry.com/Story/1109809
Chapter 14: allpoetry.com/Story/1112990
Chapter 15: allpoetry.com/Story/1115146
Chapter 16: allpoetry.com/Story/1120932
Chapter 17: storywrite.com/Story/1123217
Chapter 18: storywrite.com/Story/1125019
Chapter 19: allpoetry.com/Story/1129327
Chapter 20: allpoetry.com/Story/1137774
Chapter 21: allpoetry.com/Story/1142763
Chapter 22: allpoetry.com/Story/1150941
Chapter 23: allpoetry.com/Story/1155199
Chapter 24: storywrite.com/Story/1158107
Chapter 25: allpoetry.com/Story/1169010
Chapter 26: allpoetry.com/Story/1176056
Chapter 27: allpoetry.com/Story/1188976
Sorry this took long to add to AP.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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eew. that's original, amputated bodies in the trunk of a car. awesome. i actually like gory stuff. when i was a little kid i would sneak into my parents room and read my dad's comics. i would stare at the pictures of dead bodies or people getting tortured and stuff...i was only 6 years old! talk about morbid.
A|ice
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Hm.. I wonder who these could be.. i'm also trying to think..just like Alex! I'm trying to think about Who else that bastard Cage could have killed.. Your descriptions of horror are so well-done.. you can build up the suspense so easily.. and.. No, no and. I must read more.
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AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!
it took me a while to check back but I just had to keep reading the story. You should really make this a book it would defenetly sell everywhere
I need to read more.......
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BODIES IN THE CAR!!! excelent!! cage is full of suprises. but he scares me. i dont want to end up dead with my organs being eaten...
hehe. but yeah, awesome chapter!!
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Wow. I'm doing things a little backwards here, I just stumbled onto this story, I guess I'll have to come back and read the others in the right order..
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1. HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY
2. Great JOb!
3. tear...waiting kills me...
4. well i dont have a number four but i liked this one...short but it had alot of info....kepp em coming! -
Ooooh..this is really good..i love it..i cant wait for the next one...hehe!
i like the part when they found the bodies in the trunk..i wonder when they got put in there???? please post the next one soon!
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oohhhh another brilliant chapter! This is awesome
wahoo glad you've added it, and cant wait for the next one. well done and keep writing
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This was really good. I can't wait for more. Plz hurry and post soon.
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I can't wait for the next part! And poor Jon, he is going to die if they dont' get to the hospital soon! Post more soon!! I need more!
Always and Forever,
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lol, sorry. >_< i had to take a break and just put my emotions into poetry for a while. I've got the rest set up in my head so It wont take long to add. My birthday is coming up soon so I've got lots to do.
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You're damn right it took a long. Time. Post the next part soon!!




