(I Can't Think Up A Name)

I want to be friends again1

I want to right my wrongs2

I want to say I'm sorry3

This has gone on way too long4

I want to make believe5

Like we did back then6

I want those days back7

The days when we were friends

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  • trekkergirl
    December 6, 2008

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    wow this is great!

    I really do feel a lot of emotin in this little write. And I agree with you that sometimes the poem is an easy thing to write but the title... now that's what is hard. At least for me it is anyway. This is a great write. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. Great job!


  • FullOfLove
    November 22, 2008

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    kjhlkhlkh

    haha i can never think up names either :]P
    But i really really like this..it flows & rhymes beautifully. :]