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Cold,dead,alone..These were the only thoughts rushing through my head as the blood continue to flood my bedroom floor.2
I could hear the usual yelling,screaming and the occasion smashing vase or plate pulsating through the walls from the loungeroom downstairs.3
How i wanted to stand up to him,Marc.My mothers husband.The way he beat her black and blue,i was too scared..whenever i tried to intervine he would just attack me.He was a real piece of work this guy,left nothing to the imagination.4
He spat at me,kicked,punched and stabbed. So by now i had learnt to keep quiet...5
I knew there was nothing i could do.So i just lay,praying that she could make it through another night of this inevtable voilence.6
The sun shone bright through my window the next morning.7
The rays of light split my eyelids open.8
'Fuck' I cursed the dried puddle of blood on the floor,i grabbed a wet towel and scrubbed at the crimson patch on the hard wooden floors,then at the hardend droplets on my face.9
My arm was still tender from my own abuse the night before.10
I slipped into my purple Doc Martins,threw on my manson hoodie,my black jeans and slowly creeped down the stairs.I knew by now that they'd both be at work.But still, i was cautious.11
As i walked the 15 minutes to school i wondered what kind of day lay ahead.12
Author notes
Hmm i dont like this kind of boring but i'll TRY and make it better in the next few chapters, i promise!
ohh and ps. lex is the girl this is abouts name.
What did you think? Please comment!
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wow wow wow wow u must write more to this soon its the most amazing story ever besides ur lesbian war one lol but this is so beautiful and sad but i like sad things so i loved it and it painted a perfect picture in my head of wat was happening great descriptions
mwwa love ya
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Good start, I would have liked to see Lex better established (if not her history, then at least her personality). It also seems unlikely she could walk 15 minutes to school after losing so much blood. But your descriptions are very good, especially all of the vivid verbs you used. Good luck with the upcoming chapters!
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Awesome story. I'm looking forward to more. I have a story like this, abuse, vampires, witches, goths, sex, yeah. lol. Write more sweetie! I can't wait for more! lol.
Much love!
Always and Forever,
~Kendal
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