Scourge's daughter,Kiraa Book 1: Meet Kiraa

Kiraa was a young small lean and slim black she-cat with ice blue eyes.She had one white paw and dark golden stripes.She lives alone on the streets.One day a gray tom passed her and bumped into her.She turned and growled.He turned to her to look her in the eye.His yellow eyes glimmered.He laughed and laughed harder then looked up at her and said "A kit?!You don't want to mess with me kitty!".She smiled sweetly."Its the other way around!" She unsheathed large dog teeth and scratched his neck with no force.It was deep the gray tom cat fell as she padded down the side walk.1

She sat alone hearing rustling from the dumpster not too far away.She was finishing a rat.She licked the bones clean and chewed on them.She snapped a rib in half and ate it.Then she steadily got to her paws and padded towards the sound.She sat in front of it then settled to a laying position."I'd knew you'd come."A voice came from the corner of the alley.Her ears pricked but she didn't look up."I dropped a rat in there." A black white striped tail pointed to the dumpster.
"I saw that gray tom" The tom padded out of the shadows.He made a quiet screech and ran a paw down his neck,claws sheathed."Pretty sight,huh?"She joked.The black white striped tom sat next to her."Name is Fox.You?" "Kiraa.".The rat scratched against the walls of the dumpster making a eerie sound."SHUT THE HELL UP!"Yowled Fox.Kiraa blinked and looked at him.He looked at her."Why do they call you Fox?"He replied with pride "Because of my craftiness and amazing ability to sneak."She nodded."I'll tell others about you."He nodded to her and dashed away before she could say goodbye.2

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  • LiveLoveJabberwocky
    November 21, 2008

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    You would not BELIEVE how many Warriors fanifics I've written! I used to LOVE the series SO much! This was really good, and I'd like to hear more of the story. However there were a few punctuation mistakes. But really, it was very good! Great job!