My Secret

I have this secret1

deep within2

It's probably the worst3

Of all of my sins.4

I could never tell you5

you'd be shocked at me6

One day i may just tell you7

but we'll have to wait and see8

So far the ones who know,9

i should have never trusted10

They told some other people11

and now my life is busted12

The less you know the better13

This also includes you14

But i can reassure you15

My secrets 100 percent true

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    March 5

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    I have my own fair share of secrets that will never see the light of day, that I have told no one and absolutely no one. This is a nice little poem, get peoples hopes of hearing something important and new them shatter them. A well writen poem at that.


  • trekkergirl
    December 6, 2008

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    hummmm.... wonder what your secret was. Hope it is a good one. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. It is a good write. Just doesn't tell me what you secret is.... oh well maybe you'll tell me later.


  • XxHeroValentinexX
    November 24, 2008
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    this was very good!!! keep up the good work


  • Sgs
    November 20, 2008

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    Okay...lol! Good job and I agree that secrets are hard to tell, easier to keep in most cases. You have to be really careful.

    • Dawn Bon
      November 20, 2008

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      Yes. I told someone and now all his friends know. I thought i could trust him but i guess not. Some secrets are easy to keep but in this case mine isnt. If i was my own friend and i told me this secret, i wouldn't be able to keep it id have to tell someone.


  • K.CTheDyingReindeer
    November 20, 2008

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    *no*


    ?????? Do I know this secret of yours? And if so, I am pretty sure I did not tell anyone anything that you have ever told me that I was not supposed to tell.
    -Dani

    • Dawn Bon
      November 20, 2008
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      No Ive never told you this and i know for a fact if i did tell you a secret you wouldn't tell anyone anything only maybe if brandi held a shank toy your throat...

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