Your Story, My Thoughts

The story wasreally good. The best part was the begining. It caught the readers eye. Most people won't read a story, unless it has a good begining. It also has a good storyline. That is a key element to a good story. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job.

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  • tony333
    November 20, 2008

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    Thanks

    I agree that the beggining is very improtant.

    I am glad that it seems to come across to others how i hoped it would.

    Again, thank you.

    Regards, Tony