Dear Jane,1
Im sorry Jane but Im witting you this letter now and there is no turning back. i told you would come for you, i would always be your friend but i just cant. You've gotten yourself way too deep this time and Im not going to be there to bail you out. I don't want to hurt you but i have no choice. Your still a little girl, you need to grow up now. Listen sweetie, there is something i think i should tell you. Promises were meant to be broken.2
Sincerely,3
Cam
A contest entry
- Give me a paragraph by Dawn Bon.
200 points, ended November 19, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh my gosh! i didnt know you won a hold for this geez where have i been!?
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That was very cool. I like reading letters, and the vague impression I got here was interesting. There are lots of unanswered questions, but in this story it was okay. I loved this!
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Hmm........
A bit of misspelling...needed capitalization.
It's cool you made it into a letter, but it needs more to it, I guess.=) -
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Thanks. I didn't spell check it first.
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