The silence was unbearable. Calie thought she was about to break.1
"Awakening the dead, spirits left, secrets unkempt, stories to tell, won't you listen to my story? It's about you, and your..."2
There was an unusual voice singing a song (the above) that Calie could hear being chanted in the background of the house. She looked around but saw nobody.The voice continued.3
"DEATH!!!"4
Calie screamed and ran fiercely into the darkened room, searching for light, or some sign of life. Something other than this noise. She turned to find Draven sitting there on the stairs, with a dark shadow leaning over him. 5
"oh my god, Draven!!!"6
Calie started to run towards Draven sitting on the stairs, he was bleeding, the shadow disappeared and flushed out through the window beside her. Calie quickly shut the window and locked it. 7
"Draven...you-you-you're-"8
She started crying.9
"Bleeding, yeah i know."10
He took his shirt off and wrapped it around his arm, his arm was bleeding insanely fast and the blood was dark,dark red. The odd thing was, he kept licking up the blood, drinking his own blood so he could retrieve it. He applied pressure so it would stop bleeding but he took back in the blood that was leaving his body. 11
"Calie please, promise me something"12
"Anything, anything for you Draven, what is it?"13
Draven looked at her in the eyes, smiled, then frowned.14
"Never stop loving me, and if I die, please, don't kill yourself or do anything stupid,I want you to live your life, try and make something of yourself, just know that I'll always be in your heart, and you in mine, just-"15
Calie got mad.16
"NO, YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DIE DAMMIT!!!! I LOVE YOU-"17
Calie stopped... sighed...then said...18
"Always..."19
They held each other and started crying as they went back to lay down.20
"It will be OK Calie, I promise"21
Never did Calie doubt Draven, NEVER, but this once, she knew it wasn't OK.22
They laied back down and tried to get some sleep.23
Then out of nowhere...24
*CRASH*25
"Oh god what was that????"26
Draven held Calie close this time, she looked worried.27
*BANG*28
*BANG*29
Then two gun shots and one loud...30
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"31
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Comments
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ok I'm loving every bit of this. You're going in my Favs. Excuse me Gotta get to part4
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weird i feel strange, i can't belive he's dieing come on u can't kill him off. i have just got to know what happens. another fitting installment in this nerve raking story.
thanks for a great read. *f
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OH wow this was incredible ...
The ending was spo suspenceful ... what happens??!!
keep up the greqat wrok ur story keeps getting interesting!
~no1special~



