I embarked on the journey alone, not knowing who I was. The eternal bliss guided me. It set fire to my soul, a burning sensation I've never felt before. The mist clouded everything around me. It tried to guide me down a lost path, the tyrant failed. The passage of Light guided me through the dark, it kept me ablaze. I was alone, but not abandoned. This secluded journey has left me naked, but I was not afraid. When I could not walk any further, the Bliss gave me wings. The Wings of eternity, translucent to me. I still walk alone, searching, following. I will reach paradise.
A contest entry
- Give me a paragraph by Dawn Bon.
200 points, ended November 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
This was a single paragraph contest I entered. Hope you all enjoy it!
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it was very intresting
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This is really good. I like it a lot. You said a lot in a little space. As always the imagary is really good...good job.
beginning: 4, ending: 4.
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nice..
you will reach paradise if you keep writing like that! good job!!
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