Office Poem - Freewrite

Office Space Case,1

Desk Monkey,2

Obselete Waste of Space3

LifeFlunkey4

Why am I here?5

To pay the bills!6

Self Medicate blandness7

Drugs and Pills

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  • Rorshach gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    modern life

    not good, is it


  • trekkergirl
    December 1, 2008

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    this made me chuckle. I feel that way sometimes when I have to go to work and don't really want to be there. This is nice. Creative. And you use your words very well. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    November 24, 2008

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    I'll take it you are not fond of your job? I rather liked this, short and simple but fun to read. Usually the short one or two word lines seem jumpy but in this peice they seemed just fine. Love 'desk monkey' and 'lifeflunky' very amusing lines. Hope it lifted your bordom if only for a little while.