'Come on this way' said the teacher, motioning us forward. Lots of kids moaned and groaned. It was a school trip and we had to walk up a path to go to a place called 'polkadot palace'. 'Come on, up we come', the teacher said it louder this time, so everyone could hear. At last, we came to the top and saw a palace, but it was different, it was filled with polka dots. The polka dots were orange coloured. 'This is polkadot palace' the teacher said. 1
'Do not go anywhere near it, but you can look, now sit down on place and have your lunch.'Everyone got their lunches out from their backpacks. But I didn't, I wanted to go in. Secretly, I walked inside and the doors slammed shut behind me.
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YOu told me for only a paragraph, so I did. But if I can continue, then I will.
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it is not good
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This is really good. continue if you want
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you can say the teacher said come on in her lodest vaklse
you could say that when I walked in then I saw my class
and I went to them the end
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