A young boy sat at a window looking out at the rain. Most young boys would do this wishing that it weren't raining or imagining themselves to another world where it truly wasn't but this young boy simply looked out to acknowledge that it was indeed raining. His name was Oliver and all his life he'd been intent on only doing or thinking about doing the things that he knew he actually could. But today something very different was going to happen when the rain stops and he steps outside. A pair of perfectly ordinary stones from his own garden had found their way toward each other during the storm and now he was going to find them...1
What do you beleive shuld hapen?
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o.o oh em gee im a collabrator
i fixed the spelling mistakes 
you seriously have bad spelling xD . i think this was a little confusing or maybe its just becuase nothing makes sense to me.... idk xD
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I liked how you made the boy stand out. Besides a few grammatical errors it was really well done. I'm interested to know what will happen when he finds the stone. Keep it up
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hmmmm maby he gets attacked by vamps
good job thou and theres a few spellin mistakes
omg im a collaborator... whats that -
(should have spelt shuld as should)
I beleive personaly (although I dont actualy cair what I think) that there shuld be a portal between the two stones. (but like I said: dont cair what I think. I want to know what you think)
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