"I can't believe I let him take it that far! I'm so stupid!" Aiyana cursed - now fully clothed - running on the cliff, weaving in and out of the sharp rocks that lined the cliff, sticking out from the ground.1
Her shoe lace got caught on one of the rocks, and she fell to the ground. 2
"Fuck," She mumbled, trying to get she shoe unhooked. Then, she realized that she was merely inches from the ege of the cliff; she started to panic.3
Aiyana shifted, the rocks underneath her crumbled and broke, and she started to fall. "My Kami..."4
And she fell, landing in the ocean's dark depths. She pulled her head above water, the waves constantly trying to push her back under. And Aiyana strugged to pull herself to the shoreline, but she couldn't move. Fear paralyzed her, and she did the only thing she could do - scream for help. "Midoriiro!"5
"Oh, Midoriiro, you're so sexy," The dark-haired girl ran her hands over Midoriiro's chest, tracing his muscles with her fingernails.6
Midoriiro smirked, and kissed her lips. "As are you, Saii."7
"Hey, baby," The woman stood from her place at the bed and walked to a framed photograph on the wall. "Who's this?"8
She handed him the picture, and once he saw who it was of, it slipped from his grasp, crashing onto the floor. It was Aiyana and him.9
"Aiyana..." He whispered.10
"Hm?"11
"I have to go. I expect you to be gone when I return," He grabbed his jacket and left, leaving a confused Saii behind.12
'He's forgotten about me... He's not going to save me! I'm going to die!' Aiyana thought, as a wave crashed down on top of her, plunging her into the salty darkness of the ocean.13
"Damn it. Where could she be?!" Midoriiro walked swiftly, his eyes scanning the horizon for Aiyana. 14
He sighed, coming to a stop on the cliff. Gazing out into the ocean, he noticed a familiar sighting - Aiyana's jean jacket.15
"Holy fuck," He cursed. "She's in the ocean?!"16
Midoriiro climbed down the cliff, grabbing each naturally made handle, making his way to the bottom.17
[A/N: It wasn't that tall of a cliff, lol.]18
When at the bottom of the cliff, he dove into the ocean; his body being enveloped by the salty water. 19
"Aiya- Aiyana!" Midoriiro coughed, swimming against the fierce waves. And there she lay, floating on the water.20
"Aiyana!" He swam to her, grabbing her around the waist. Waves crashed down on them, as he swam to the shore. 21
Finally, he reached the shore, and set her on the sand-covered beach. Midoriiro placed his ear to his chest to check if she was breathing - she was.22
"Thank Kami, she's alive..."23
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Comments
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This was quite the creative write. It seemed as though I got a bit lost in the timing of events between the two woman, but overall - the story line in this was clear and the imagery pretty vivid.
I enjoyed reading this. It seemed as though it went by almost too quickly and I was looking for more verses to follow. Nicely done.
Kim -
Woot. You had me a little worried there. I thought for sure that she was doomed to drown. Good to see she didn't though. oOo Perhaps it was fate, no? Nice supsense story you got going. Keep up the good work Brittnie!

