Soft and sensual
kisses enter,
gently to ones mind.1
"I love you"
just a whisper.
Kisses touch
the depths of ones soul.
Hold me
Hold me like there's
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
You are all I want
my heart travels
through time and space,
for it to find you.
My love, the one
this heart calls its own. 2
Hold me
Hold me like there's
Hold me like there's no tomorrow3
Age does not matter,
so my search goes on
till this soul
finds the only mate
that can stand love's test.
Hold me
Hold me like there's
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
Society will not hold my love
you will hold my love,
only then will I know
that you are the spirit
which has called my name
and wishes to be with me.
Hold me
Hold me like there's
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
Please say you are mine
Forevermore. 4
Hold me
Hold me like there's
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
Author notes
soft words that are song in my mind
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wow
beautiful -
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh aye indeed... another nice and soft one. I love it sis...sometimes tis just what we want and need. To be held.
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This is a really good poem. I really enjoyed how you broke it down. And I definitely agree with Enchantess about the "Hold me thing." The repetition made the poem so much better.
xoxox.
Kevan. -
This is really lovely Riftkin. I like the lines "Hold me, Hold me like there's, Hold me like there's no tomorrow" these are touching lines because no one knows if there will be a tomorrow.
Great job.
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Nice song....
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Beautiful song Sister. Your words have so much meaning for all who know or have known love. I can hear soft piano's and violins in the background as I read it again.
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Loved it!
That's a nice song. It gives me an idea for a story...But anyways, nice and sweet song. Love the picture! ^.^
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