Raisa Choices

Not a story, yet. Am torn between two character and am hoping that my wonderful friends will help me. I’ve got a name, Boone. Now Boone can either be a mildly charming young man or a man with a bode that melts your insides. 1

Ok, more details ~ 2

1) Mildly good-looking lackey, dark messed hair, unkempt clothes, almost like he’s slept in them. Very thin, but has nice arm definition. Friendly, overly so, smart with glasses. Very pale eyes with feel lips. Computer smart.3

2) This Boone will give Kale some competition, although Kale hasn’t been in the picture. Curly blonde hair, unruly, but in a charming way. Brown eyes with a hint of gold. Smiles often, glasses. Nice body, works out.4

So any thought? Boone 1 or Boone 2? 5

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  • Collingwood08
    November 21, 2008

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    Go with the number one choice. But dont make him so nerdy like a computer geek. Make him good looking, but also make him safe as his not going to stray then. Like he has to be a bit of a mummy's boy.
    You can go with the name Kent or stay with the name Boone.Even if his safe- being good looking could make Kale sweat. But it's your choice.

    Julie

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    BOTH! :D

    You may mix them? or that isn't allowed?
    Have him as a semi-hot computer smart dude.. who has wavy hair, a shy smile.. x.x the two are good, but.. I just am not satisfied classifying them like that.. maybe it's just me x.x

    I hope I was helpful, Brooke


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      November 17, 2008
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      Theirs an idea, but I didn't want to do the classic hot guy vs. hot guy. I get tried of the sterio type (you know I can't spell) handsome, great bode, brainless guys. So I thought I'd put a very geeky guy in there, but I wanted some competition for Kale, so thats where Boone one came into. Was that a runon sentence or what?

      Thanks for you vote.
      Brooke


      • sodancewithsoda silver member
        November 20, 2008
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        Aaaah good point x.x I understand, totally x.x

        I go with the first one, then hahahahhaha


  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    November 16, 2008

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    Well my vote's for the first choice, but it might just be that I have a thing for nerdy men. I think that even if he's not over-the-top charming, he can still give Kale soome competition - hell, I'd go for the nerd over the pompous god-like man any day. I also think the first Boone sounds a bit more realistic and useful, in terms of the story. You already have Kale kind of fillling the second role - why would you need a duplicate? Go with choice one, and I'll make sure I stop by the wink at him occassionally - just don't tell my computer nerd boyfriend. *laughs*


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      November 16, 2008
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      See I was thinking that too, but then I wanted Kale to sweat.

      Thanks for you vote
      Brooke

      • IrishYndina Greeters member
        November 16, 2008
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        Wouldn't it be better to make Kale sweat over a man he initially didn't see as competition? Sounds like better plot fodder to me.

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