you're my last thought.

you're the last thing running through my mind as i slide the glistening silver blade across my skin. 1

your smile is one of my last thoughts.2

all the good times we shared.., just falling down the drain3

those times mean nothing anymore.4

your laugh is what makes me stop and think., "am i doing the right thing?"5

but it's not enough. 6

the way your eyes glow is the last thing to make me smile.7

slowly, i slide the blade down my arm8

watching the crimson blood start pouring out.9

you're the last thing going through my mind..10

as i die.

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  • Shuberth
    December 30, 2008
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    this should be @ allpoetry