SnowFlakes

You can't hear it. 1

As it drifts around you.2

You can see it as it lands on your eyelashes.3

You can feel it as it lands on your tongue.4

It's soft and whispery5

Like angel's voices6

No one can truly hold it7

It isn't like rain8

It may not really look like much9

But it takes away my pain10

It can make a sound however 11

When it lands among the leaves12

That landed there before it13

A brown and earthy bed14

My snowflakes15

They are whispers16

And they're silver 17

Tiny hearts

Author notes

Soft sounds

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

  • Loved it. Tyler this is really great!


  • Riftkin
    November 24, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    glad I was to read this, thank you for entering my contest.

    Riftkin