One Christmas Wish

The only one wish I have for Christmas this year is to see my grandfather again. The one who sang to me, hugged me tight, loved me. I wish cancer never existed as well. Then maybe my grandfather would still be in this world. Still looking at me with those big dark eyes and singing sweet lullabies to me. This year, I don't care about fancy gifts wrapped in elegant paper, I just want to talk to my grandfather one last time and tell him I love and miss him. All I want to do is tell him goodbye.

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  • I felt this completely. I cried and cried and longed for my grandmother to come back not just for Christmas but for life and sometimes I wish she could for one moment. She has in my dreams and I know she has in spirit and for a long time I hated ushering her into my thoughts because it pained me and I was so full of regret from getting sick the only time I had a chance to see her. But I saw her on her last days... It was heartbreaking. MY grandmother such a big, cuddly woman who loves all of her grand kids ... WELL..ideally I am her great grand child, but none the less. She was as close to me as any...

    Beautiful so heartfelt it brought back some great memories for me. And I think your grandfather would be there in heart and in your soul at Christmas. filling you with so much love.


    Exceptional
    Brilliant
    Heartwarming a real tear jerker of truth
    Keep writing
    I will keep reading


    Blair


  • scriptor
    January 11
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    this is good

    It is full of emotion without any obvious effort. Im sorry you lost your grandfather


  • LivingDeadGirl56
    November 17, 2008
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    This makes mine look really shallow, but it was very sweet indeed.


  • trekkergirl
    November 16, 2008
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    This is a very emotional write that you have here. I am sorry that your grandfather has/had cancer. I am assuming that he is already dead. And I know how much one misses someone they love after they are dead. I too have lost loved ones.

    Thank you for sharing this I know it is a very personal write for you to have written. I can only say I am sorry you are feeling so much pain.