Loneliness

Here I am once again
waiting.1

Waiting for life
to come and pass me by.
Seems like I just can't get it right
this life thing.2

I watch as others have fun,
swimming,
dancing,
holding hands as they walk along.
Enjoying everything that they can.3

Yet when I try
I always get it wrong.4

Some how I am always on the outside
looking in
wishing
wanting
to be included.
Yet I'm not.
I'm always the outsider.5

So here I sit
waiting...
wondering...
will I ever get it right?

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  • SaccharineMini
    November 17, 2008

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    This was so good! The picture is brilliant, and the poem is just very great. Your emotions are awesome!
    Good Job!


  • Dawn Bon
    November 17, 2008
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    This is cute. and i love how you put the picture at the top. great job, thanks for entering!


  • trekkergirl
    November 16, 2008
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    okay