The Competition

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Julie sipped her bloody-mary and Victor his soda water. "Emily was really fantastic, it would be nice to find another like her," Julie commented.1

"She decided to go out like a pro," he laughed.2

"Would you tell me if she was better than I am?" Julie's light blonde hair shined in the dim rays of romantic light from the colored bulbs above. Her eyes, usually sky blue, seemed dark in the Oasis, a large nightclub. Couples danced as the band played cover tunes, popular, rock, and country.3

"Yes, and as I told you, she was good; not better. I've discovered with you that sex with you has a lot to do with what I have invested in you. There is really no comparison. She was a good fuck, but sex with you is fantastic. I also find a special thrill hunting with you. Believe me, I would not if I did not.4

"You've had sex with a lot of women," continued Victor. "Was Emily the best?" Victor, deeply attracted to Julie's petite form, found himself emotionally attached as well. This surprised him, as he'd never been seriously committed to a woman before Julie.5

"I also liked little Karen a lot," Julie admitted. Julie had been mesmerized by Victor's large build, his almost black, penetrating, and hypnotic eyes, and his dark hair.6

"So did I. Most of the women I tend to forget, but one now and then stays with me."7

Julie became aware that Victor seemed lost in thought. "Are you looking at that woman? She doesn't look like your usual type." Julie referred to a woman at a table across the room.8

"She's a vampire," he answered.9

"How can you tell?"10

"I don't know, I guess it's instinct."11

"Does she know you're a vampire?"12

"Probably."13

"What are you going to do?" asked Julie with interest.14

"Talk with her, I suppose. Come on, we'll go over to her table."15

They crossed the large room to her table. "Hello," the woman said, smiling. She was a handsome woman who appeared to be about fifteen years older than Julie's nineteen. Her violet eyes were disturbing to Julie and she could sense an evil in them. The woman was about six inches taller than Julie and her long, straight, shiny hair glowed black in the light of the club.16

"I believe we have something in common and things to discuss,” commented Victor with forced friendliness.17

"I believe we must." She smiled wider.18

"There are enough people dying in this area from my appetite alone. What do you feed on?" he asked.19

"I prefer young men, but I also feed on women and children."20

"How long have you been around Branson?"21

"Arrived just this week, I wanted to get away from the city."22

"Us, too. By the way, I'm Victor and this is Julie."23

"Quite a surprise and she's human, too. I am Aspasia, just call me Aspie. You brought it up, what's your feeding preference?"24

"I feed on young women. Been laying off Branson for a while, but decided to hunt here tonight. I suppose you are planning to feed tonight as well."25

"Julie is hands off, I guess," said Aspie with pretended disappointment.26

Julie smiled, but she was nervous from the woman's appraising stare.27

"Are you planning to stay in the area?" queried the Victor.28

"I'd like to for a while, do we negotiate or fight?"29

"Rarely does anything come from fighting among vampires,” answered Victor solemnly. “Except panic among the citizenry where they feed. I think it best to try to avoid that.30

"The public get into an uproar over missing children,” continued Victor, “but a few young men shouldn't matter much. Just not too many in the vicinity. While you are here, I would like you to refrain from feeding on young women and children."31

"I could accept your conditions, but why should I? You're vulnerable. I can attack your human."32

"To your peril, I would destroy you if you harmed her."33

"My, my. A vampire in love; I don't think I have seen that before.34

"Okay, I get the men and you take the women. Seems equitable. Why do you hunt with a human?"35

"I find it more exciting."36

"What do you think of being a vampire's lover?"37

"I find it very fulfilling," Julie stated with pride. Julie had been a white witch before she'd met Victor. She had become his companion and assistant.38

"I find it more exciting to take women without hypnotism. Julie helps to entrap them and we both enjoy them sexually."39

"Most men are stronger than I am,” said Apasia. “So with them I have to use a trance. I've never tried to take a victim without using a trance, but if I'm to limit myself to men I'll have to hypnotize them. 40

“It's easy to get them. I let them pick me up and when I get them alone, I put them in a trance. I enjoy the game of enticing them. It could be fun without a trance. I guess I might tie them up."41

"Do you usually have sex with your victims?" Julie asked.42

"Depends on how hungry I am and how attractive they are." Aspasia laughed.43

"I almost always have sex with my victims," said Victor.44

"We have an agreement, then," Victor added after a moment.45

"Yes, I suppose,” answered Aspasia with a mischievous glint in her eyes.46

"Good. Would you like to see Julie work?"47

"Sure."48

"Julie, see if you can pick up a couple."49

Julie looked around the crowded club as the waitress took their order for another round of drinks.50

"What Julie does, is entices a victim or victims to come to our ranch. We usually take them riding. Then with their cooperation or by force, we have sex with them. After that of course, I chow down on them. I have an incinerator and use that to dispose of their bodies."51

"You are very well organized. This ought to be interesting. Is the man for me?"52

"Yes, Aspie. If what I have in mind works, you may have a chance to tie him up and see what it is like with a man who is not in a trance. If you see someone you like, tell Julie. I like my women pretty and slim."53

"What about that couple there." Aspie indicated a blonde about 5'7" and a man with dark hair about two hundred pounds, and around six feet.54

"You like your men young, slim and trim,” said Victor. Turning toward Julie, “take a shot at that couple. See if they would like to play poker at the ranch and go riding in the morning." 55

“You expect them to come voluntarily?”56

“Aspie, most of the people at the clubs are tourists and many have never been riding. The chance to ride is very appealing to them."57

Julie walked to their table. "Hi. I'm Julie. We're wanting to play some poker, fun stakes, and we need a couple more players. I'm with them." She indicated the vampires.58

"We have a ranch, you could spend the night and in the morning go riding. Would you like that?"59

"Melinda, what do you think?" said the man, obviously interested.60

"It sounds really fun."61

"Okay, we'll come. I guess we can follow you."62

"That sounds good."63

"She's Melinda, and I'm George."64

They were coming to the vampires' table and Aspie said, "Amazing!" It had taken under five minutes. Julie made the introductions. They left the club and drove in both vehicles to the ranch. No one paid them any particular attention.65

At the ranch Victor and Julie showed their guests to the game room, which among other things had a pool table and a poker table. They put five chairs around the poker table. When everyone was seated, Melinda said to Aspasia, “You have amazing eyes, I've never seen purple irises. Are they contacts?”66

“No, they're quite natural,” replied Aspasia very pleased by the compliment. “Yours are turquoise, aren't they. That's rather unusual as well.”67

Melinda was a darker blonde than Julie, in her early twenties, about about one hundred-thirty pounds, and slender. Victor looked about Aspasia's age. 68

Victor laid the ground rules. They played penny ante for a couple of hours. Victor saw to it that Melinda won. He was able to cheat quite easily. His plan was working well, Melinda was pleased with herself and having a great time. He wanted to put her at ease.69

"Okay! Boys against the girls, strip poker," Victor announced.70

"Melinda will take us to the cleaners," joked George.71

Victor had a different outcome in mind.72

Things went as expected. Victor had intended to build up Melinda and George's comfort level before springing the second part of his plan; strip poker. By allowing Melinda to win, he felt she would feel more secure about playing strip poker. He intended now to make her the loser, to allow her time to get used to being exposed naked to the group. This would prepare her and allow her to become more comfortable with her nakedness and sexuality. 73

The third part of his plan would come into play then. Melinda would be the big loser and the first to go out. The rule was everybody had to stay at the table until the game was over. After that, the second big surprise.74

It was clear by the way Melinda had paled at the mention of strip poker, that she didn't want to play. It was clear, also, that George did and was excited about it. Melinda had no choice, but to give in.75

"The winner of each hand gets to choose the person and the item of clothing that must be removed. One person loses one item of clothing per hand. Outerwear must be removed before underwear. We play until all the boys or all the girls are naked."76

Melinda lost her shirt, jeans, shoes and socks in no time. It was obvious that she would like to crawl into a hole and hide, but she was adjusting. Victor let her sit in her panties and bra for awhile and let himself and the others take some losses. He couldn't fix every hand, but he was a skilled player and an accomplished cheat when he chose to be. All the women were losing their shirts! Jewelry didn't count, but it wouldn't have mattered much.77

George was obviously more interested in seeing the other women nude than he was Melinda. Apparently he was acquainted with Melinda's nudity or was trying to help save her modesty. In either case, for the hands he won, he focused on stripping Julie. Julie still had her bra, panties, shoes and socks. Aspie had lost only her shirt. Victor was down shirt and pants, and George had lost his shirt.78

"Aces over Jacks. Melinda. Your panties," smiled Victor.79

Melinda turned a definite shade of red, but obediently removed her panties. She had only her bra left.80

Aspie lost her jeans and boots, George his pants, Victor held, and Julie was down to bra, panties and a sock.81

"A straight flush. Melinda, you're out. Let's see your beautiful tits. Stand up and turn around a couple of times," said Victor smiling with humor in his voice.82

Melinda had an excellent body. Victor was not disappointed and neither was Julie. Light creamy skin, silky, and soft, medium breasts, nice areolas, and firm nipples, she was some aroused in spite of herself. Her gorgeous legs came together perfectly at her mound which her blonde hair did not hide. Her inner labia protruded a little. She had goose bumps from embarrassment. Victor was ready to take her, but the game wasn't over. Julie was anxious as well.83

Purposely, he finished off Aspie next. Her breasts were larger, but so was her size. Her pussy was hairier than Victor liked, but he didn't like sex with vampires, anyway.84

It was clear that George liked Julie, and not clear if he liked Melinda more. Victor let him have the honor of winning the game by winning the clothing off Julie. Julie's body was much like Melinda's, but her areolas were a lighter shade of pink, and she was shorter than Melinda.85

"Well, the boys win. Now George and I will draw high card for you women. The loser gets at least one women."86

Visibly Melinda was taken aback. She had not anticipated this turn of events. She had not really been willing to play strip poker. Although she had been trapped into it, she had enjoyed it some. She found Victor attractive, but she intended to be true to George, but did George intend to be true to her? She was horrified. Beyond her belief, George was actually going to allow her to be won or lost in a bet!87

Victor planned to win Melinda right off so that George couldn't choose her, and also because he felt she would feel better about it that way. It would have been interesting to see if George would choose Melinda or Julie if he had won the first cut, but that was something that Victor had to control. So he had to win the first cut to be certain to win Melinda.88

Victor shuffled the cards and told George, “You go first.” George drew the king of clubs. 89

Victor took his turn and got the ace of hearts, winning. “I'll start with Melinda,” he said and smiled graciously at her. 90

Melinda waited to see if George would object, but he started the next round with a queen of diamonds. Melinda, extremely pissed at George, got up and walked over to Victor and sat in his lap, planting a wet kiss on his mouth. She determined that she would fuck Victor's brains out. George picked Julie.91

Aspie was up for grabs next. Victor cut a three and George a nine.92

Pulling Julie aside Victor whispered, "Do you want to fuck this guy?"93

"No."94

"Well, after he has sex with Aspie and you tie him up. Join me and you can have sex with Melinda."95

He called to Melinda, "Let's go into this bedroom."96

Melinda, still naked, followed him into the bedroom. There were four bedrooms and the others went into the larger of the remaining three. Melinda kissed Victor deeply immediately and melted into his arms. She was delicious and her body soft as she molded into him. Victor was very pleased with her eagerness.97

"I have a request. Would you give me a blowjob?"98

"I'd love to. Want to do me as I do you?"99

"I'd love it."100

Melinda had never done a blowjob, but nothing was going to stop her. As far as she was concerned, it was over between her and George. She'd never forgive George. 101

Victor lay down toward the end of the bed and Melinda climbed into position on top of him. She took his soft penis into her mouth and messaged his balls, sucking him. Victor spread the lips of her vulva, found her clit and began stimulating it with his tongue and fingers. He was firm, but gentler than he usually was. He didn't want to dissuade or alarm her. With his fingers he continued playing with her clitoris and entered her canal with his tongue. She began coming. She was some salty, yet sweet. He enjoyed her flavor. He began to harden and she started stroking him, tightly gripping his stick and playing with his shaft lightly with her teeth. 102

"Oh that's good. Slow down," said Victor. "Okay, faster now. Slower, slower. Okay, go for it, girl."103

He exploded into her mouth. The taste was bitter and cold. Melinda thought it odd that it was so cold and she didn't like the taste, but she swallowed it, anyway. She had no clue that he was a vampire. Victor turned her over and worked over her vulva, tormenting her g-spot until she was nearly crying in ecstasy.104

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"You made it clear that you want me," said Julie. "That was rude. Therefore, Aspie goes first and you had better make it good."107

Aspasia performed fellatio and then George ate her out. He noticed that she seemed unusually cool, but he didn't think much of it. He didn't like her taste, but he kept thinking about Julie. He really did like Julie and Julie was prettier than Melinda.108

He had to wait a while before he could get hard again so he could fuck Aspasia, so he alternated kissing Julie and Aspasia. He liked Julie better. Finally he was able to enter Aspasia with his driver. She could do things with her vaginal muscles he had never experienced. She gripped his penis so tightly in her pussy, that it nearly hurt. He kind of liked it, although he was getting a little sore. He gave up his wad.109

Julie brought some rope and she and Aspasia tied George to the bed.110

"What's going on?"111

"A surprise," smiled Julie.112

Julie went to the other bedroom.113

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Melinda was surprised to see Julie.116

"Where's George?"117

"He is still with Aspie."118

"Have you fucked him already?"119

"Not yet."120

"Making him wait." Girl to girl she confided, "Thanks."121

"How are you two doing?" asked Julie122

"We're doing great, Julie. Shall we show her what we can do to her together?" said Victor enthusiastically.123

"Be happy to."124

Julie began to eat out Melinda while Victor kissed Melinda and massaged her breasts and tummy. Julie was more aggressive than usual and Melinda was beside herself with pleasure. She had started out angry, but as she got into it, she found herself having a great time. Orgasm after orgasm exploded inside her. Julie loved her taste.125

When Julie finished Victor said, "How have you liked it so far?"126

"It's been wonderful. The best sex I have had."127

"Would you like to do Julie?"128

Melinda had never eaten a woman's pussy, but then she hadn't done a blowjob either. She thought, 'Oh what the hell, may as well try it.'129

Julie lay on the bed and Melinda spread her labia with her fingers revealing Julie's clitoris shaft, hood, clit, urethral orifice and Julie's hole. She began by licking along Julie's thighs and the outer lips of her vulva. Then she licked Julie's pleasure point and sucked it. After a few minutes Julie had an orgasm. Stimulating Julie's clit then with her fingers, Melinda sucked on the inner lips of Julie's cunt. Then she entered Julie. Melinda was pleased to find that she liked Julie's flavor and began to eat her eagerly. Julie moaned with pleasure having climax after climax. While Melinda ate Julie, Victor played with Melinda's pussy.130

"That was great," said Melinda.131

"Yes it was," said Julie.132

"Over easy or sunny side up?" joked Victor. "My turn."133

"Sunny side up. In any case, I'd like to face you," said Melinda.134

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Julie went back to the other bedroom. George was bound and gagged. He was a frightened as a man can be. There were pairs of puncture wounds from Aspasia's fangs all over his body. It was clear that George already knew he was with a vampire and his chance of survival slim.137

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Victor kissed Melinda and caressed her breasts. Melinda responded eagerly, almost aggressively in return, massaging his waist as he kissed her. She found his very blood engorged penis and guided it between the equally blood swollen lips of her pussy. Although it was the largest penis she had experienced, she looked forward to feeling it inside herself. He grabbed her ass cheeks and powerfully yet slowly began driving himself inside her. Moving his hands to her waist, he rubbed firmly there for a while. She thought she would be orgasmed out, but they still came. She began gyrating her hips to the motion of his thrusts. He would slow down and speed up in order to control himself and make the experience last. She felt the occasional ooze of his liquid as he came inside her. In a final blast, he gave up his load.140

Still thrusting inside her, he found the artery at the side of her neck and bit in deeply without warning. She was surprised and shocked.141

"Oh God! You're a vampire."142

"Grip me tightly and it will be less painful for you."143

She struggled with all her strength for several moments, realized it was futile, and gripped him. Except for the pain, it was very much like going to sleep.144

Victor felt her muscles relax and remained in her while her body temperature dropped. Then he threw her dead naked body over his shoulder and carried her outside to the incinerator. He set the timer for two hours to be certain it was enough. Then he joined the girls.145

"Is he dead?"146

"Yes." said Aspasia147

"Are you finished with him."148

"Yes."149

"Carry him to the incinerator, girls"150

They took him to the incinerator and stuffed him in. There was just enough room for the two bodies. Victor fired it up.151

"In a trance or out of it, which do you like better, Aspie?"152

"Out of it. That was a wild experience."153

"Melinda was exceptional. She started out wanting to get back at George. She really put herself into it. Toward the end she was really enjoying herself." said Victor.154

"It was great," said Julie. "Maybe we should do this again."

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  • jasje
    September 17
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    good luck with my contest


    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      September 18
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      Hi Jasje!

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.

      Andy


  • HazelEyedAngel
    September 7

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    that was very interesting. thank you for the entry.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      September 7
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      Hi EW!

      I wasn't sure how you'd feel about this story. I've got a lot of stories, but you said no vampires and humans, if I remember right. If the vampires didn't suck the blood from humans, it doesn't seem like they'd be vampires.

      I've got a lot of vampire stories, but this one is among my favorites.

      Thanks for hosting.

      Andy

  • Hi Andy!
    I liked it. ALOT! Good freakin job!

    • Hi!

      I'm very pleased you like this story. Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy

  • I love the new spin on things with two vampires! Another great short story. Aspie wasn't my favorite character, probably becuase we don't see as much of her character as Melinda; however, I would definitely like to see more of her. I quite enjoyed your story, and can't wait to read the next one!

    *sets off to read the next on the list*

    • I'm glad you like these!

      Aspasia becomes a thorn in Victor's side in the stories that follow. There are about six total with Aspasia. She was fun to write, but she's a complication to Victor.

      I'm afraid that Melinda's role ended in the incinerator

      Andy

  • awesome

    i'm not the one for vampires, but this was a really good story. im usualy one with the wolves, but this caught my interest a lot.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • Hi!

      I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Victor goes through a lot of women. He takes what they have to offer and then drains them dry. He's a cold and lustful vampire.

      I've only got two stories with wolves. I've got three with werewolves.

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.

      I have a whole series of stories about Victor.

      Andy

  • Different, but good!

    I love that you took a different take on vampirism but not taking it to an extreme where it seemed humanistic. The fact that a human helped the vampire prey shows the dark side of both the human and vampire world, which is what is needed to be shown but you took a nice different take on it! Awesome!

    • Hi!

      I'm glad you like this story. I've written a series of stories with Victor. I hope to turn them into a novel at some point.

      The first story I wrote at Allpoetry before Storywrite was divided from it, was about this vampire. He was nameless then. It won my first gold trophy for a story. I continued the series and character because of the interest of my readers.

      I'm currently revising the series.

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

      Andy

  • wow... that was different and interesting. a little disturbing, but that was what made it so good. it was a different twist to the whole vampire thing... would have never thought a human would help a vampire get its prey. craziness. lol. good job!

    • Hi!

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.

      Yep, Victor liked Julie and decided to keep her as a companion and assistant. It was unusual for him. He usually just takes the women sexually and then drains them of blood.

      May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    March 20

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    Amazingly well written and original. Passionate, steamy, and dark... I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Great write and thanks for entering the contest!

    • Hi Ms. Pixie!

      I'm very pleased that you like this story. Victor has a large appetite for blood and sex.

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • Ashlyn Rose
    March 7

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    sick and disturbing I can't say I didn't like it but its hard to say i loved it b/c it was just so unexpected...just wow that was oh my god

    • Hi!

      I hope you were at least entertained by this story.

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    February 22

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    I like the connection and raw honestly between your characters.

    I like the idea of humans deceiving humans and giving them to vampires.

    I like real emotion you put into the strip poker thing. Instead of just jumping into it, you made the characters thing about it and get warmed up.

    The sex scenes were very well written. I never read things like this unless they deal with vampires. You did an excellent job!

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      February 23

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      Hi there!

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I'm very pleased that you like this story. I've written a lot of vampire stories and poetry.

      This story is from the series of stories about Victor, the vampire,'A Hedonistic Vampire'. There are about 38 stories in all at this time. I removed most of them a while back in order to rewrite them.

      I have about four other vampires in other stories and series at Storywrite. My vampire poetry is at Allpoetry.

      I hope you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy

      • (sorry it took so long to reply) That is amazign, to be able to keep focused on a story (or character) for that many stories. I can't even finish a second chapter. I am glad you entered your piece into my contest because I had almost given up on Vampire fiction (due to a very popular book that shadows real talented writers with its nonsense.).

        Again, thank you!


  • CrystalTigress
    February 6
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    interesting

    thanks for entering the contest. i am loking through all the stories before i make any decisions.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      February 6
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      Hi!

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and applauding. I appreciate it. I hope you enjoy this story.

      May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • Riftkin
    November 24, 2008
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    this was very interesting to read. Thank you very much for entering this contest.

    Riftkin

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      November 24, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and all the applause. Thanks again for the gold. I appreciate it.

      I hope you had good entries and much fun.

      Andy

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