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When I look at you and you look at me,2
you count to two while I count to three.3
When I've counted to three, you know what I see,4
I see the same girl staring back at me.5
..............................6
ohhh7
Please, I need to know,8
If you want to know,9
how I really feel.10
yeah.11
And if you dont want to know,12
what I need you to know,13
then I dont know what I'd do.14
For I love you......15
ohhhhhhh hoooooo16
For I love you......17
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When I see you walking down the street,19
you look at me, and our gazes meet.20
But then you turn and walk across the street,21
seeing you walk away, my heart skips a beat.22
..........................................23
ohhh24
Please, I need to know,25
If you want to know,26
how I really feel.27
yeah.28
And if you dont want to know,29
what I need you to know,30
then I dont know what I'd do.31
For I love you......32
ohhhhhhh hoooooo33
For I love you......34
.........................................35
Please say you love me36
(for I love you)37
Please, I need to know!38
(for I love you)39
Please, oh please!40
(for I love you)41
I need to know!42
(for I love you)43
............................44
ohhh45
Please, I need to know,46
If you want to know,47
how I really feel.48
yeah.49
And if you dont want to know,50
what I need you to know,51
then I dont know what I'd do.52
For I love you......53
ohhhhhhh hoooooo54
For I love you......55
Author notes
I felt sort of sad so I wrote this.
A contest entry
- Rip My Heart Out by Corpses.
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Oooohh! I got goosebumps just reading the first line!
When I look at you and you look at me,
you count to two while I count to three.
When I've counted to three, you know what I see,
I see the same girl staring back at me.
This is one of my favorite lines. It gave me chills! I'm very impressed by the depth you show in this song. It's extremely beautiful. Did you write this for a special girl, or did you get the inspiration from the idea you have of love, or seeing others in love? I look forward to reading more of your songs. Great work! Keep me posted, k?! -
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The first lines are mainly about trust, couples want to know that if you close your eyes, your partner will still be there.
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age :14
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Um...This is a song..I was looking for storys. Sorry.
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sorry it is not above 500
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Wow, can someone sing this to me? I want to be serenaded!
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It was good. Keep writing lyrics!
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