lil stealer

"Sadie was coming over!" Raygn protested happly her sister Jc said,"oh great just another one of your friends to get on my nerves today "
"hey stop it shes my friend and guess what shes spending the night to so ha ha "
"oh just shut up your so annoying" Jc said in a rude way and went out of the room just as Raygns mom was walking in the livingroom,"whats up sweety" Raygns mom mrs.hammond said then raygn said,nothing just fighting with Jc again she said in the way ..........well she didnt exactally say it but she made it sound like she was saying that Sadie was stupid and annoying snd she did use the word annoying"1

so Sadie got tooken away from her best friend by Jc the hole time they went out to linch and all night that Raygn planned all of2

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i will write the rest of the story if you comment and say hoy awsome or bad it was.thanks

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please comment please i worked hard on it ( not really)

how do you feel Raygn felt when her sister took her friend away and why did her sister say all thise things to Raygn and then end up acting like Sadies BFFL

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