trapped part 3 :o

"I my dear am a dark angel" Paul replies with a smile.1

"how-how-how nice" you manage to stutter.2

In the mists of being scared you find your self gazing into Paul's eyes. you now know why he didn't look human before, because he isn't. After awhile his large wings didn't seem so menacing and you managed to climb back into your chair. As you finished eating Paul who had been quiet for most of the meal suddenly looked up and you and said.3

"______ i choose to show you my wings because i trust you and i hope that one day you can trust me"4

you are a little shocked by this because you didn't think a dark creature could have feelings. After regaining your composer you nod.5

"yes that would be nice"6

"well now i must be leaving i have work to do" Paul says to you with a slight nod.7

disappointed by this you curse under your breath about how you have to 8

keep all your questions for later.9

Paul stops and turns around, he looks at you for a moment like he's lost in thought and then simply says10

"good night i will see you tomorrow"11

you stand up and head towards your room to think about the days events and to get some sleep. when you get back to your room you find a boquie of white roses on the desk and a red night gown with your name in crystals on it. There was a note attached to the roses, it read:12

Enjoy your stay 13

feel free to ask me anything14

Paul15

You smile smelling the roses some how he seemed to know every thing about you but you knew nothing about him.16

"he's like every guy" you thought to your self "but he's not..".17

suddenly there was a loud knock on the door, you open the door to find.....18

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hee hee hee yay for cliffhangers. well heres part 3!!!!!

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  • Brokenangels
    April 19, 2005
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    la spoon >.<

  • Brokenangels
    April 19, 2005
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    meow lol well all i have to say is are u calling me fat? lol well thanks for the cooment

  • Angel Of Elements
    April 18, 2005
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    Anna! you still have to read my story!!! im writing the second part!!!!!!! anyways I still like your storys. Keep up the good work!!!. . . . . .good sheba!

  • vampires are cool
    April 18, 2005
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    yay

    umm...hi.....again...guess who it is....forky forky

  • vampires are cool
    April 18, 2005
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    cool dude

    weelllllll.......they say i must write a critical review....I'm just not that kinda person sooooooo....I say........I like it!

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