When Elena Collins, werewolf and supernatural being, wakes abruptly one morning she has to finally face the facts. With the last remnants of her nightmare floating on the edges of her mind, she knows for sure that her werewolf puberty has finally begun. Now, faced with the upcoming fright of the first change, she must also cope with a new companion, new powers, missing parents, and hallucinogenic side effects.1
Enter Jake, werewolf diplomat with a sexy, knowing grin and a secret agenda of his own. He spins a complex web of lies, that just may catch both Elena and himself within its grasp. Jake seeks to bring their progressing relationship to the forefront, however, his father's plans just might hinder everything he strives for. Now Jake is in a race of time to counter act the plot his father has set into motion, save his chance of love with Elena, and recover his throne.2
Both Elena and Jake are far beyond human-- and both are running for their lives. Together they are riding a tide of danger, lust, the magic of the change, and discovering their true selves. With friends betraying them, and killers stalking their every move! They must use any means necessary to over come the king, as well as their enemies to survive.3
***** CHARACTER LIST: *****4
Elena Anne Collins
Lisa Collins (Elena's mom)
Charles Collins (Elena's dad)
Sam (Child Hood Friend, cousin to Tanya)
Tanya (Child Hood Friend, cousin to Sam)5
Jake (restricted to those who read the story only)
Marcus (Born of Chaos, Brother to Eryk, is one of two 'kings')
Eryk (Born of Chaos, Brother to Marcus, is one of two 'kings')
______(Eryk's offspring, vampire heir to throne)
______(one of Eryk's vampire subordinates)6
Alistair (Marcus's left hand man)
Callum (Medic & Trusted Adviser, body guard)
William (Messenger boy and Servant)
Dean (battle tactics Expert, Martial Arts Expert)
Ian (twin to Jarrod, Jake's personal body guard, solider)
Jarrod (twin to Ian, Jake's personal body guard, solider)
Antonio (Liaison between foreign packs & groups, body guard)
Ruby (skilled fighter, senior officer)7
other characters are to be added as soon as I think of them! XD8
*****POINT OF VIEW:*****9
The point of view of this novel/novella in the making is going to be told from multiple points of views. Thus, keeping the reader entertained, as well as giving everyone insight in the minds of certain key characters. The main characters P.O.V. that will be used through out the story is: Elena; Jake; Alistair; and the occasional P.O.V from another of the characters. 10
*****TONE:*****11
The tone is rather fast paced. It will consist of varoious different moods, all according to the direction my imagination sends my writing hand in. The moods will switch from faced paced to slow descriptive, fanatical, romance or flirty, to serious and suspenseful/ tension filled.12
*****SYMBOLISM:*****13
1) Jake's ring: symbolizes power of a nation/group, Is the sole symbol of the successor to the throne, grants power to it's wearer.
2) Elena's markings: symbolizes the embodiment of the moon goddess, means purity and love.
3). Werewolf: symbolizes a two-sided being, conflicted emotions/thoughts, inner battle of good vs. evil. 14
*****THEME:***** 15
None as of yet. 16
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I love this. I agree it's a between Ginger Snaps & Rise Of The Lycan. But with your creatfive writtening skills this will be amazing.
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Thank you! I do hope your right. lol I've never read Ginger Snaps but now that you mention it I will have to read it sometime.
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Cool...
Sounds like an interesting concept...
Kinda some where between 'Ginger Snaps' & 'Rise of the Lycans' & although its hard to come up with something totally original with such genres of werevolves & vampires, its not impossible... I think you have a great chance with this, just try to keep thinking outside of the box as Moon's Fury would suggest you are... Basically, draw on the familiar concepts & lore & create something new & uniquely you...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!


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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it is very appreciated. Yes, it is kind of hard now-a-days to create anything original, but I hope to do as you said in your comment.
"Basically, draw on the familiar concepts & lore & create something new & uniquely you... " Right on the money with that one!
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Hope this helps
Your main problem here of course is not how good your story is. There are so many Vampire/werewolf books/movies out now that you have to do something really different to get noticed. When a genre becomes oversaturated you have to put a new twist on it. It can be POV at the most basic level, or it can be something as simple as the setting. Every successful author does something different, that's the challenge and it makes writing and reading all the more fun. -
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Thank you for the very helpful tip. I kind of knew that already, but it always helps when someone reinforces it; since a writer can easily get sidetracked from the plot. XD I think that is the hardest part, being just one of the many yet standing out within that number. I hope my novel in progress seems different than most other werewolf stories, atleast that is what I have been told so far. Though trying to help the story keep its individuality is far harder than I thought. LOl Again, thank you for the reminder, it will be very helpful to me in my upcoming chapters.
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You go girlfreind. I love vampires and werewolfs and this is going to be good cann't wait to read the stories.


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XD I'm glad you think so! The stories are on my page. I've only written up to chapter four so far, but number five is in the making.
I love vamps and werewolves too! lol
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woah...sounds really good!
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Lols thank you!
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