enchantress

I am the girl that never got noticed in school and still to this day, I am shy, caring, loving, romantic, bright, smart, witty, always willing to listen to others and offer help in the best way that I can, I'm a mother, a sister, a daughter, a friend and used to be a wife, I am the girl that wants to be outstanding, but I am just me.

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  • Heartsick silver member
    December 16, 2008

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    This is fabulous! "I am the girl that wants to be outstanding, but I am just me" ~ this line is so touching and sweet I'm the girl who was never noticed in school too, but that doesn't mean I'm not making something of my life. What a way to sum yourself up in one beautiful sentence.

    ~ Ink


  • KitterBean
    November 25, 2008

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    Yay! I really enjoyed this! YOu covered so many aspects and your personality was dominant in just one sentence! Great job! You are in the tops!
    Kitter


  • Reaver Greeters member
    November 15, 2008

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    Described yourself perfectly in one long sentence Great job in using the limited space and good in the contest!

    Rian


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Wow, I think I could use much of that sentence to describe me as well, but of course I won't.

    Wonderfully done.


  • islekine
    November 14, 2008

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    You sound pretty outstanding to me!

    And I'll bet you are to your folks, siblings, and children...does anything else count?
    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!

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