Just a dreamer

[Verse 1]1

I'm drifting of into space
whenever I walk into class and I see you
standing there
I can hardly breath
ohhh...I can hardly see
And when you talk that's all I hear
nothing else in this world matters when you are near
ohh when your near2

[chorus]
and I'm just a dreamer,
dreamin about you
thinking about you all the time
your smile is what gets me trough the day
your laugh is all I gotta hear then every thing is okay
you just gotta know
ohhh I'm just a dreamer...
just dreaming about you3

[verse 2]
When you look at me I can hardly breath..
ohhh... i can hardly breath
When i walk up to the front of the class 4

your all I see... your all I see
and im just a dreamer ...
dreaming about you5

[chorus]6

[bridge]
Oh how I love to see you smile
ohh when you smile
I can hardly breath...
I can hardly breath...
you take my breath away...
and I just gotta say....7

[chorusx2]8

and ohhh... im just a dreamer.
oh just dreamin about you9

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lovvvveeeee youuuu tyler

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  • Sliver Rainshine
    January 13
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    aww i love it love aww your work amazing


  • kissedbyan angel
    November 17, 2008
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    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

    its awesome but it needs some editing here and there you know just some little tweek ups

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • WritersEffigy gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Its nice, but needs some editing.


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Very beautiful. I know any girl or guy would love to get this sung to she/he.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    November 15, 2008

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    Awwww this is so, so , so beautiful! I am a sucker for love and romance, ask any of my friends, lol. And I simply adore this. The words flow perfectly together and they are just incredible.
    Joann


  • WanderingGypsy
    November 14, 2008

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    Wonderful Song

    I enjoyed the freshness of new love. I remember those days. Great read and a wonderful write. ~Wandering Gypsy~

    beginning: 2, language: 5, plot: 1, ending: 3, dialog: 1, characters: 1.

  • xxDemonicxx
    November 14, 2008
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    cuuuuuuuuuuute

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