Going

As I go I hear your voice1

Im leaving now, I have no choice2

Your love is both my thoughts and fears3

Here I Lay and feel your tears4

I love you so, my heart you take5

but please dont cry 6

I will not wake7

This is strange8

there is no light9

the world I'm in is dark as night10

Im not in heaven11

Im not in hell12

I am nowhere, but all is well13

for days and days you sat and cried14

but you can stop15

I have not died

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  • CedricDempNQ2
    November 15, 2008
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    Pretty emotive Meliss. Certainly has some impact in the sensitivity and expression.