It was a sunny day, I was in a large crowed and everyone was talking to me,1
I was good, I liked it. Then something when wrong, what when wrong?2
It had nothing to do with me, nothing at all, they were my friends, it could3
not of been me. They were all so familiar, what went wrong?4
The sun went away, the heat was gone, my friends walked away, i think they5
were cold. I was not sad I was bitter, what went wrong?6
Author notes
this is the beggining, it comes long before 'Inside my mind' well attaually only a day or so in time but what happens in the real world has no meaning in this, it does change the attmosphere though. ps can you figure out whats happening in the real world?
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I liked this a lot, I think this is a poem
Very deep write, keep writing because this was fantastic- thanks for commenting on my poem 
All the best,
Pozo
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