When will you see the tears streaming down my face and try to understand my pain? When will you hear my strangled sobs at night and come to my room to hold me through my nightmares? When will my silence be broken enough for you to hear my voice?
Author notes
raspberry?
A contest entry
- Give me prompts by Prodigious.Mirth.
150 points, ended December 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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O.o mmm close I very much love rasberries
and it is a berry for shizzaz.
I like this short paragraph. it does what I like a story to do. it questions. And in my eyes it is important to ask and to answer questions in a story.
Thanks for entering
very much appreciated
Good Luck
Blair



