WHen?

When will you see the tears streaming down my face and try to understand my pain? When will you hear my strangled sobs at night and come to my room to hold me through my nightmares? When will my silence be broken enough for you to hear my voice?

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  • Prodigious.Mirth
    November 14, 2008
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    O.o mmm close I very much love rasberries
    and it is a berry for shizzaz.

    I like this short paragraph. it does what I like a story to do. it questions. And in my eyes it is important to ask and to answer questions in a story.

    Thanks for entering
    very much appreciated
    Good Luck
    Blair