Stabbing Pains

She could feel him inside of her. It felt as though he was stabbing the inside of her stomach with a dull blade. She wanted to scream with all her might but the sound wouldn't escape her thoat. She knew that she had to get away, but she was well aware that he could kill her at any second. He suddenly threw his hand around her thoat as he began to go deeper and harded into her. She knew that he would be finishing any second now, for this was an event that she knew all to well. She's known this act since the day her mother brought him home.

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mangos??

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  • mickeyjames
    November 14, 2008
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    lol eh i had to guess mango. and yes you can. i have plenty of dark disturbing things like that, that come right off the top of my head.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    November 14, 2008

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    ewwwwww ewwww icky Mangos.
    Now before I comment I need an assurance I can definitely use this because right now I am writing a story. And this would be so freaking perfect.
    I mean it would not be used to much later in the story I am sure, but I think that this very well could gel with the theme.
    I like it :/ not mango's though.

    Thanks for entering
    I very much appreciate your entry.
    Good Luck
    Blair

    • mickeyjames
      November 14, 2008
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      lol eh i had to guess mango. and yes you can. i have plenty of dark disturbing things like that, that come right off the top of my head.