Kiti's sparkloholic characters.

You have to let me do this... because. This basically sums up the character descriptions in exerts, so just read it and you'll know the personality. Haha. 1

All Three except Ull!:2

I walked along the sidewalk, my bookbag slung along my arm. I walked quickly, not bothering to 'stop and smell the roses'. I slowed down as I neared Payton's house. [i]"Ainslie, you're always so hasty! You shouldn't be![/i] That's what she always tells me. I strongly disagree, but I tried arguing, and she got angry. That's how she is. So easily angered at the littlest things, it makes me upset. 3

I stepped up Payton's porch steps, knowing I was blushing already. My skinny legs knocked together as I stood there, trembling. I had to focus, or he'd think I needed to pee... I straightened up, then outstretched a long, skinny arm and rang the doorbell.4

There was only silence for a few minutes, and I wondered if he'd gone off to school without me. Maybe I'd been too late! Oh no, I can't be! He'll be so angry with me! I felt my eyes tearing up, and I heard myself choking on tears as I fell to the wooden floor. 5

"Ainslie?" I heard a soft, cool voice ask from above me. I immediately blinked out the remaining tears with my long eyelashes, then stood up, spinning around to face him. I was only barely thirteen, and a few inches shorter than him, while he was fourteen, and tall and athletic. I let out a long, contended sigh. "Are you crying?" I heard him ask. I was soon being comforted by the kindhearted, soothing Payton.6

I relaxed and smiled at him. "I'm fine." Payton is different than anybody I've ever met. He's strong and athletic, yet he's not blockheaded and mean like most of the football players in our class. He's always relaxed, and never panics. He has cute, shaggy brown hair and he sometimes wears a baseball cap, and he always dresses casually. It was hard not to love him, I knew. In fact, my closest friend, July loved him as well. This consisted to be a problem. She thought I, the shy, nerdy girl didn't have a crush on anybody, and she admired me about that lie. If she knew I liked Payton as much as her, she would probably freak out. I cracked a smile as I imagined her face, flushed into a dark red color and her long black hair spinning everywhere. It was always a little funny when she gets angry, because her eyes seem to change color, and her makeup starts to smear from crying.7

Payton seemed to bring me back to reality, tapping me on my head. I glanced up at him in surprise, then giggled as I followed him along the sidewalk. Then again, Payton was much closer to July than he was to me. At times like now, he didn't even talk to me, and yet he was always chatting with July, the popular, beautiful cheerleader who did little dances for him at the basketball games. I sighed again, and he glanced at me worriedly. He opened his mouth to speak. "Nothing. Nothing is wrong."8

But inside, I knew everything was wrong.9

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Out of first person, one more thing. Payton acts as if he likes another girl entirely, except he secretly likes Ainslie back. Tada. Hope you don't get mad at me.

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