Wondering

I've been looking at the Flaming Sun
And the Cresent like Moon
All throughout the sky
I've been searching for answers1

For the Phrase "I Love You"
Three Simple Words
Yet sometimes they hold no meaning
Are the words even enough 2

to express the feeling I have for you
You tell me those words a Thousand times
Something holds me up from saying them back
I can't say words I don't know if I mean3

I don't know if your the perfect one for me
A few months later I don't know where you are
You just said you had to go and left me standing there
I sit down wishing 4

I had wasted my breath telling you those words
On those three delicate words
What does "I Love You" even mean
I guess now I'll never really know5

Author notes

sorry it's another poem guys This one kind of just popped out to me I like it so now I want to know your opinion on it

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  • citcat
    February 7
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    great poem!
    i really enjoyed it
    well donee


  • Dreams of Insanity
    November 20, 2008
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    Hohohooooo!
    So you miss Rico Suave, ehhhhhh?
    Was the fun on the boat not enough for you Jenny? Going for a round two!? xD

    Joel: *beats Star with a frying pan* Gah....you're annoying...=.=

    Anyways @_@

    Great poem Jen! I really liked it! Well written and beautiful, like all of your previous poems! Great great great....APPLES! Tch...o.o I want an apple now.