Dorothy is Evil !!!

I was loved in Munchkin Land,till that witch of the north dropped in on them and filled their little brains with what she claimed was right and wrong.1

Glinda, all sunshine and giddy, what a farce to be seen by one and all. My sister and I saw through all her goody two shoes way of thinking.2

Then when those Munchkins start to want to rule themselves, that storm came out of no where. I told them all to hide and take cover and I would stand outside to protect them.3

Where was that no good-er Glinda? She was not in sight with that house came falling out of the sky.4

Oh, no. Not her, I was out there trying to protect the munchkins. Then that house landed on me, and as I am laying there dying, they more or less hold a party thanking Glinda and this.5

~coughs up blood~6

This child from the star, the star called Kansas.7

~dies hearing sister coming for the ruby slippers, once Glinda removes them and puts them on Dorothy's feet, light in my eyes are put out forever~8

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okay a dark take on the Wizard of Oz

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  • TNTrouble
    November 19, 2008

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    Ha...very nice take on a classic tale as seen from another point of view. I like it as I always tend to root for the villians at any rate.


  • SaccharineMini
    November 14, 2008

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    Oh...Rifktin this is an interesting take on the Wizard of Oz. Coming for the Witch. I like it! You tell her side of the story, not just what everyone sees on tv. And yes as Bane says there is a story or show called Wicked you could read or see, it is a different view and really good. Great job! I love your new stories!
    -R


  • Bane Wraith
    November 13, 2008

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    There Is an actual story, that I suggest you read. It's called "Wicked". And it holds a secondary view.


  • cre8iv-writer
    November 13, 2008

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    Very good sis!! I liked the view from the 'evil' witch...I always thought Glinda was just too damn happy!!!


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Wow, I like that you are looking at it from the witch's point of view.

    Great job!

    I love seeing all the new styles in your writing.


  • Fizbop
    November 13, 2008

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    Intresting perspective you could take this in so many ways. You could spin it off about how another witch maybe of the north that's wicked enacts revenge of both her sisters deaths.

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