I see it in his eyes, as he lock them onto mine, the depression that lies deep down inside. He puts on a happy face to try and please everyone else, hiding his own pain.1
I can see right through him, like glass, through his protection shield, he does not hide his emotions as well as he thinks. With a face full of no expressions, his brown eyes tell a story...2
Deep into the abyss of his pupils, I see his soul. All of the pain and suffering of his past. The misery of all he has been through, the beatings, the losses, and everything in between. 3
At times, I can see how he felt that day. As if every tear that fell from his eyes that moment had built up, causing his eyes to turn to pools, yet not a drip rolls down his cheeks. Every emotion gathers up inside of him, but not a tear is shed, no smile cracked, not a frown is apparent. 4
I also see the happy times, and his caring heart. At times, his dark eyes shine and his face lights up. I see his face when Kara says she loves him, the smile breaks through, and an expression is finally shown.5
It shows again when we talk about time spent together. The stern expression drops, and a smile cracks. 6
In his eyes, I can see how much he truly cares. When I talk, two brown eyes focus on me, and only me. When I am sad, his eyes match my mood. When I am happy, his eyes fill with joy. When I cry, I see his eyes tear up, for the sole reason that I am sad, and he does not know how to help. Though his face remains straight and stern, his emotions still show, though not a Tear sheds, his eyes fill with sadness, and nothing more.7
Tuesday night, I saw him break. Not only did his eyes fill with a depression that I had never seen before, but his eyes again filled with pools, not like the usual pools, these ones flooded into rivers that grazed his bronze cheeks, flowing off of his chin, and crashing to the ground.8
For the first time, he broke, not only because of his own sorrow, but because it broke his heart to see a 12 year old and a 15 year old to lose their mother. 9
I wish that all of the people who call him a heartless bastard could have been there to see it, not a tear of his own self pity, but rivers flooding down his face, all because he could not handle seeing someone else so depressed, looking into his cousins eyes, he cracked into a million pieces.
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but rivers flooding down his face, all because he could not handle seeing someone else so depressed, looking into his cousins eyes, he cracked into a million pieces.
That was amazing...the added "he cracked into a million pieces" really brings power to the ending. If this is who I think, he is far from a heartless bastard (Though I do not know him well). Amazing write!
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Wow....Raphaël-Apollinaire is a heartless bastard!!! haha!! Just kidding, Raphaël-Apollinaire, you are cool, I give you points for that!! haha!!! This was a very good write, Sarah ^^
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Haha...Wow...Raf is not THAT emotionless....He sure as hell seems upset when he visits and you cannot come with him, that shows that he cares I bet watching him break killed you on the inside, huh? Watching the strongest man in your life crack down....I am sorry you had to see it... ...
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Awwwww...He really does hide it really well, then all of a sudden cracks....but Gotta give the kid props..He is like god to them right now.
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Raf is a heartless bastard...But with good reason....and yet, even though he seems heartless, everyone knows how much he loves you...you are the only person he shows compassion towards, it is pretty amazing if you ask me....thanks for keeping him from doing anything stupid, Sarah...
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you made me cry. that was beautiful and if its about who i think it is, then i believe it to be completly true.
Yes there were some spelling mistakes.
But that didn't distract from this piece.
great job.
cheers
Hunter~
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Thanks
I typed it without looking, I was on his computer..most of the spelling mistakes are fixed now though 
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Nice, but.........
A lot of misspelling, your story seems rushed. It could be more descriptive. I loved the thought of what you were trying to convey, though. I can sense the sadness.=)=)=) -
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The spelling mistakes were because I wrote it, then typed it just looking at the paper, not the screen, I am going to go back and fix the mistakes later, but I was on my gf's laptop, and was not looking at my typing.
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That was a very good write...Am I really that emotionless???? Meh, who the fuck care, i love you
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