I am sorry.

I hate those words.
They never carry enough emotion
No matter how I try.
The only words that come;
I am sorry.1

It's like my words hit a wall
Between me
And the one that hurts.
They slide down to the floor
And sit there.
Emotionless,
like I don’t even care.2

But I do.
I cannot express
the hurt in my heart.
My longing to comfort you.
To hold you and make
Everything
Just go away.
To be able to promise
Everything will turn out right3

Truth is I don’t know.
I don’t know if they will.
And I am just as scared
As you.

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  • LilMissFearless
    December 12, 2008
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    Very niceee !

  • evelynrose
    November 12, 2008
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    You are amazing!!! And I know exactly how you feel. We need to have a writing night.

  • Bruce Wayne
    November 12, 2008

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    HO-LY MO-TH-ER OF GO-D... *picks jaw off the ground* this... honestly shows something into my head the last two days or so... I mean.. its perfect time and reads my thoughts directly.. I cant really explain that... uhh.. yeah... anyway, moving on to the work itself, its pieced together really well and the way it concludes is just... perfect... keep up the good work Elli!!!!!

  • Much-Dipstick
    November 12, 2008

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    wow elli, you reached into my head and found my thoughts brilliant amazing superb excellent beautiful emotional splendid stunning write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *favourites poem* sooooooooooooooo soooooooooo beautiful and amazing.