My greatest sorrow (for contest)

The truth is staring us in the face, but we choose to ignore it; hatred is burrowing into our heart, and we choose to embrace it; love is yearning for our soul, and we choose to despise it....what is our world coming to?

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  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    November 13, 2008

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    Our world is definitly falling apart. and this is really sad =[ it's true, the part about, well all of it, but the significant part to me is the hatred part, it's sad that everyone embraces hatred, but it's true, great job, love it =]

    -Dani


  • Oddems.
    November 12, 2008
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    Something that isn't good. Wonderful sentence and congrats, you're a finalist.

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