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You left - and you took the world with you.

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  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    November 13, 2008

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    I agree with Prim-Rose, this is so sad, yet it happens so often *sigh* beautiful, just beautiful how you described this with only nine words, it's deep, love it =] great job =]

    -Dani


  • Oddems.
    November 12, 2008
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    Something so sad...yet happens to many. Great sentence and good luck.

    PR