Out of breath, we climb aboard laughing. Jenna hefts our suitcases into the luggage rack and we commandeer a table seat. We keep glimpsing at each other, secret smiles dancing in our eyes as we are the only ones who know why we almost didn't make it. We are on our way to Cornwall Jenna and I, this will be our first holiday together, and even more special because today we had a commitment ceremony. We held it in our favourite gay bar, with our closest friends present, it was beautiful!1
Our vows were ones we had written together, with all the little promises we personally wanted to make, along with some of the traditional marriage vows that we felt important to commit to.2
Looking at Jen, I see the hunger flicker in her eyes, and i am sure it is reflected in mine. We search the other occupants of the carriage, it is quite quiet. I lean over the table and run my finger over her eyes, down her nose, across her cheek, and finally offer it to her to kiss. She kisses it and draws it into her mouth, nibbling gently with her perfect white teeth. The desire in me begins to build.3
I draw her face to mine, and sweep her soft honey coloured hair away from her face. Gently I run my tongue over her lips and then kiss her deeply. She loves me to suck on her tongue, and offers it to me now. I suck it gently into my mouth, tasting the lingering sweetness of the champagne we shared earlier. I am becoming wet, and want her so badly. 4
The train pulls into a station and one of the passengers from our carriage alights. There is only an elderly couple now, further down the train sitting with their backs to us. 5
I reach under the table, and gently lift her dress, I allow my fingers to play on her calves and then her thighs for several moments before i allow myself to stroke her through the delicate lace of her underwear. She is so wet already, and that makes my own desire rise almost to the point of explosion. After one more quick glance aroud, I slide under the table onto my knees.6
Simone! she says but I ignore her and begin to caress her womanhood with the merest tip of my finger. As she begins to respond I bring my mouth to her warm sweetness and begin to suckle. She is moaning now, and I draw away for a moment to give her something to bite down on, all I can find to hand is the book I brought for the journey.7
As I slide my tongue into her I feel her muscles contract with pleasure. I lick and suck and probe, eventually sliding two fingers inside her whilst continuing to flick at her clitoris with my tongue. She comes in a sudden explosion, ejaculating more than I have ever known her to, and after a few more lingering kisses around her warm wetness, I gently lick her dry.8
As I get back into my seat, I realise what neither of us had noticed, the tea trolley is parked quite near to our table. It was not there before! I turn slightly, and see the hostess sitting at the table behind ours, she has been watching us, and is still caressing herself.9
I hush to Jenna "look" she sees straight away what I want her to see and gives me a conspiratorial grin. She comes and sits on the table before me, and slides her hand under my shirt to my bare breasts, my nipples instanty harden, and then she is kissing me I moan deep in my throat, wanting the pleasure so badly that I know she can give me. Why did I wear trousers?10
Knowing Jen as I do, I should know that she has already thought of that, she slowly slides her hand into my trouser pocket, and pulls it inside out. She draws her nail scissors out of her handbag and cuts the pocet off. She then slides off the table to sit beside me, and with one hand carressing my breasts she slides her other into my now non-existent pocket. We are kissing hungrily as she starts to stroke my labia open to access my clit, her touch is so good that I feel the wetness intensify just at the merest flick. She slides her long fingers into me and I am moving now trying to feel all of her. I cannot resist, and slowly put my hand under her skirts to please her again. We moan into each others mouths, the heat building until we come together in a beautiful, and intensely satisfying orgasm.11
We have just adjusted our clothes, when we here the hostess cry out.12
The elderly gentlemen gets up and looks our way, and we smile our secret smile once more, that was very close.13
Author notes
I wanted to try an erotic story for a while, I hope the content is not offensive to anyone, I was given the courage to write this from a poet I will call Sweetie, she will know who she is, and she dared me!
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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I guess I should have waited until I got home to indulge in my curiosity of your works. All the same, this is a great send off to what I know will be a long night. *giggles*
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coolio
i never thought trains were that fun til now....
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good...good....good
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well done. i liked how it connects to the other story you have, again a unique approach
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Hmm...nice. That's all I can say. I need to pick up my jaw, now, excuse me. Ha. It was good. You could continue this, and get the hostess in on it too. Just a suggestion. Well, it was really good. I do wish I could write erotica, but...well, I don't know. Keep 'em coming, though.
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jeez motivator...sorta harsh rn't u?
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sorry, got a bit put off, say, u don't know if some little shit called 'darkshadow123' stopped here, do you? i'm motivator, scroll through this page to find out 4 me please, thanx! oh very intersting trainride, good!
no offence but u wudn't be intersted in my work, so don't bother ok?
Edited on Apr 17, 11:40 because 'little shit on the loose 'darkshadow123' seen him?'. -
This was SOME train ride my dear! And it appears that the hostess enjoyed service time as much as the passengers for once! Excellent job!
Lily ~*
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