Dead Seasons

feels like summer's on its way.1

it's mid november almost may.2

you and me playing near the bay3

couldn't see it any other way.4

wish I could stay today5

but now I see it was never meant to be this way.6

delay your tears as I slowly walk away7

your body is like pray which gradually turns to decay.8

it's finally may9

but all I want is for it to go away10

you left me forever that day.11

killed yourself cause I couldn't stay.12

feels like winter's on it's way.13

memories of may beginning to fade.14

but still I lay, crying the nights away15

wishing you'd come back today.

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  • GossipGirlLuvR
    March 3
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    I love the rhyming. This was so clever. Great Job.


  • Dawn Bon
    November 12, 2008
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    [my ear hurts]

    its all rhymie!! i like it.


  • Celestial Rose
    November 11, 2008

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    well done. It was worded quite well, I was able to 'feel' your voice, the voice of the speaker. Good job.


  • Sha Wujing
    November 11, 2008
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    Nice...

    ^^