Kama Sutra Lovely (poetry)

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like peony spirits,
beneath the brush of ardent dawn ants
gathering wits of Spring, who bend their gambol heads
open, press into each other’s dewey svelteness, 4

our mouths gather a pink winsome
upon the slow language of tongues
whose sensate god has captured
the wants of flower oils’
awakening glow 5

your aureolas darken, their purple ridges sway
to the silent art my fingertips have learned
plying hues off petals baby tulips paint
within my wanting6

my lips touch a tenderness upon your nipples, tenderly
each, in its own turn, each7

to the sigh shape our mouths discover again
as the curve of our backs
our hips close beneath
shifts syncopation8

your hands guide
my ardent blueberry veins
along clitoral beads,
their birth, new sounds we become 9

you tuck me, flamboyantly flows my surrender
your tongue glides along my lips
as the throat I so love purrs10

how a morning lark, distant, aloft
blooms straight into a colorful litheness of gardens
the way a soul giving birth
to
itself11


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  • Night Hope
    November 18
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    You are magnificent, my Beloved.




  • kaylaface
    November 11, 2008
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    Very sensual, and sexy without coming off as dirty and filled with perversion. Beautifully done.

  • Empty Closet
    November 11, 2008

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    i love the last stanza, it's amazing. I also like the way you referenced wildlife, and flowers, turning them into a symbol for what you wanted.


  • Olinda
    November 11, 2008

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    wow this is truly an amazing poem.

    how a morning lark, distant, aloft
    blooms straight into a colorful litheness of gardens
    the way a soul giving birth
    to
    itself11


    trembles


    that is probably the best part of the poem, but you have amazing word usage, and very good phrases

    great peice! good job


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    WOW!!!! Beautifully done and hot! I lvoed it.


  • Matt Coggan
    November 11, 2008

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    jeezus

    how old are you? Your profile said 15, regardless of the possible implications of someone so young writing words of this nature, it is awesome, the lexis is divine and general mood is sensual and almost etherial.

    Bloody well done!

    beginning: 4, language: 5, ending: 4.


    • Danny Beatty
      November 11, 2008
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      i'm 61, my profile has pics of me ... i will correct the profile age ... i wrote this when I was 15 .. ...

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