In the Star Village Hoshiko was continuing her training. While Kaori witnessed Jiraya's death. And Tomotsu was wondering somewhere in the world. Lets begin this story with Kaori. After Jiraya's death Kaori went on searching the world just like Jiraya did and being Jiraya's daughter she knew everything about the ninja arts that Jiraya knew. Kaori was wondering around somewhere in the Grass village. When she ran into Tomotsu Uchiha. At once she could tell that Tomotsu was an enemy as could Tomotsu. They began to engage in battle when Hoshiko stepped in and stoped the fighting from beginning. We all learned something about the other that day. Hoshiko learned that Jiraya had died and that his daughter had taken his place. Tomotsu learned that Jiraya had a daughter!!!! And Hoshiko learned that Tomotsu was from the famed Uchiha Clan. Hoshiko had been on a mission to locate Jiraya because the Star Village was under attack from the Stone Village. Learning that Jiraya was dead Hoshiko began to move out and return to her village.1
"Hold on a minute" said Tomotsu. Hoshiko waited for them to speak. "How about me and Kaori help you out" said Tomotsu. Kaori looked flabbergasted. "I never agreed to help out!!!!" screamed Kaori. "Fine" said Tomotsu. So Hoshiko headed back to the Star Village to report what happened to Jiraya. As Tomotsu followed her unnoticed back to the Star Village. When Hoshiko had arrived at the Star Village the stone village had already attack. So Hoshiko started fighting the enemy while Tomotsu waited just outside the border of the Star Village. The fighting raged on for several hours. When finally the stone village gave up (because Hoshiko had used her most powerful move (the move is when a bunch of stars come around her hand and usually kill the enemy and she can use it as many times as she wants in a day but it gets weaker every time it is used)). Then Hishiko reported to the leader of the star village.2
Hoshiko was to be punished very much. For she had not directly reported to the Star Village and fought in the battle. Just as she was about to be attacked (but not killed) as her punishment there was a loud shout that came from her side "Fire-Style Dragon Flame Jutsu" (as you know Tomotsu is an Uchiha and so he is naturally adapt at Fire-Style Justsu) yelled Tomotsu. The person who was about to attack Hoshiko was just wounded badly. "Don't worry I haven't fatally wounded him, he has just been burnt up a bit, I didn't use that much charka" said Tomotsu. No one knew exactly what had just happened. Then the leader of the Star Village figured out that Tomotsu had attack the man. He was impressed with Tomotsu attack and offered him to become a member of the star village. Tomotsu said "If I left my village on my own why would I want to join yours"? The leader just stood there unknowing what to say. "Exactly" said Tomotsu.3
As Tomotsu became frustrated with this offer with the leader of the Star Village he just used flash step and left (for those of you that don't know flash step is when you see someone and then it seems like that just teleported because they are so fast). Meanwhile Kaori had gone to the Leaf to report that Jiraya was dead. "What that blasted fool he should have known not to take on Pein!!!" screamed Tsunade while she sobbed. "Not Jiraya ugg things just keep getting worse for me" said Tsunade. Kaori simply left not wanted to her more about her dead father. Tomotsu and Kaori ran into each while traveling. They decided to have that fight that Hoshiko had interrupted. Both of them started of using taijutsu. While neither of them were doing any damage Tomotsu decided to use "Fire-Style Fireball Jutsu!" Kaori was almost hit by the attack but she was able to flash step away from it. "Damn it" yelled Tomotsu. Kaori then saw an opening to use Rasengan. "Rasengan!!!" yelled Kaori she thought that she Tomotsu but then he suddenly used a Chidori at full power (Chidori at full power and a Rasengan cancel each other out). Both Tomotsu and Kaori flew backward from the explosion. Being excellent ninja both of them they were able to rebound off the walls without a problem. Then both of them left using flash step knowing that the battle would end in a tie. 4
After Tomotsu tied to Kaori he went on traveling the world. He wandered into the moon village. Being a missing-nin he had to hide in the shadows when he saw a girl about 15 years old. She had immediately spotted Tomotsu. Tomotsu new that he couldn't let this girl live so he yelled "Fire-Style Dragon Fire Jutsu"!!! Somehow she had reflected the attack back at Tomotsu. Tomotsu easily flashed stepped away from the reflected attack. Walking towards the girl. She suddenly flashed out a Katana from her side. So Tomotsu took a kunai from his sleeve and hit the katana head on. "Kaminari Delltoro" said the girl. Tomotsu was caught off guard and was hit by the attack, but dodged the giant dragon made out of electricity that followed. After getting hit Tomotsu used "Water-Style Water Dragon Jutsu" the girl dodged the attack. 5
Tomotsu flash stepped over to the girl and said "whats your name"? At first the girl said nothing and then she spoke "Ren". "So Ren why don't you join my on my travels?" said Tomotsu. Ren was a robot that was greatly feared by the village and had no friends or family and was treated like a jinchûriki. "Yes" Ren said. So Ren and Tomotsu continued on their travels. For about a month Ren never said anything, but then gradually she began to talk more and more often to Tomotsu. When Ren saw anyone else she was always quit she never spoke to anyone but Tomotsu. 6
Ren was basically a tool to Tomotsu but he treated her well. One day Tomotsu decided to pay a trip home to the Leaf Village. As soon as he was at the leaf village gate about 30 ninjas attacked him so he knocked 10 of them away used Fire-Style The Great Rolling Fireball on 5 of them and Ren killed the other 15 with her katana. While continuing into the village Tomotsu and Ren saw Sakura, Ren cut off her arms and legs while Tomotsu ran behind her and stuck a kunai in her back. Her spine was completely messed up after that and she had no arms or legs. So some ninja found her and took her to Tsunade, but Tsunade couldn't do anything with an injury this bad. So Sakura was going to be in the Leaf Village Hospital forever.7
Tomotsu decided to pay a visit to his old friend Gaara. For the average ninja it takes 3 days to get to Sunagakure but for Ren and Tomotsu it took about 3 seconds. The problem was getting into the village undetected because Tomotsu didn't want to start a war. So eventually Tomotsu decided to use the same jutsu that the Akatasuki used and projected their image into the Kazekage's building. At first Gaara had no idea what happened then he realized the shape that was Tomotsu. "Tomotsu what are you doing here you know that I can't do anything for you if you get caught." said Gaara, "Yes I know sometimes being a missing-nin is such a nuisance, but anyway I wanted you to meet Ren." said Tomotsu. "Why did you make your projection go away?" said Tomotsu. "I like him." she said. That shocked Tomotsu because she had never felt anything towards anyone except Tomotsu but was more of a father to her. 8
As Ren and Tomotsu were leaving Sunagakure sand came out of no where. Tomotsu and Ren both flashed stepped away easily but then more sand came at then. Tomotsu realized it was Gaara who was attacking them. "Gaara why are you attacking us?" asked Tomotsu "Don't take it personally I have to do it for my village" responded Gaara. Knowing that it would be hard for Ren to fight Gaara Tomotsu told Ren "Stay back this is my fight." So the fight began again. Gaara just kept attacking Tomotsu with sand and Tomotsu kept flash stepping away but he could never find an opening to attack. Tomotsu began shaking his head "This is quite bothersome, I can't find an opening." So he did something he hasn't done for about 5 years. He activated his Sharingan. "Now we can get started." and a smirk crossed Tomotsu face. Immediately Tomotsu moved over to Gaara with a Chidori in his hand. "If I remember right this is how Sasuke pierced your sand shield." said Tomotsu. 9
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Kaori (belongs to Kaori-Chan) or Hoshiko or Ren (belongs to Kagamine Rin)10
Author notes
I love ma first naruto story
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Comments
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Tsk Tsk Tsk. I've read it before, and this doesn't work for either option.
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This background sux, you can't read the story.
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Why is the font blue?
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