Speakers on full, drowning his thoughts in song, and when the boy is ready to pull, he'll fire and suffer, but not for long.
Author notes
No one needs 'em,
And so we can plead them.
Get arid of them and be done,
With the murderous tool of a gun.
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Aw, it's so sad, I hate drowning in thoughts, in fact I am right now, oh and did I mention that I lovee this?? hehe, great job =DD
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A sad sentence...one that is true for many, which makes it even sadder. Plus the lyrical quality it had added to the effect. Excellent job and good luck!
PR
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i love how it could have easily been the lyrics to a song. Great job with your sentence! I'm jealous of it
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Lol, thanks.
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